初中英语人教新目标八年级下册Unit 5写作指导和范文背诵.doc

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1、八年级英语下册Unit 5写作指导和范文背诵一、写作指导【必背短语】go off（闹钟）发出响声 . pick up 接电话fall asleep 进入梦乡，睡着 die down 逐断变弱；逐新消失have a look 看一看 make ones way 前往；费力地前进in silence 沉默无声 take down拆除；往下拽；记录at first首先最初 have fun 玩得开心 in a mess凌乱不堪；乱七八糟 in times of difficulty在困难时期right away立刻；马上 because of因为 tell the truth说实话 go away离

2、去 call out大声呼叫be busy doing sth忙于做某事 see sb sth doing sth看见某人或某物正在做某事 try to do sth努力做某事 have trouble（in） doing sth做某事有困难或麻烦【必背句型】(1) It happened in/on . (2) I was doing .wh e n .(3) While I was doing .he .(4) What a pleasant day I had!(5) This is a day I will never forget.【写作任务】某英文周刊正在进行以“One thing

3、 Im proud of”为题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇不少于90词的文章，记述一件你引以为傲的事情， 参加此次活动。【思路点拨】1.审题： (1) 该写作任务要求用英语写一篇记叙文，记述一件自己引以为傲的事情。写作时应注意记叙文的六要 素，即 我们通常所说的五个“W”(what, who, when, where, why)和一个“H”(how)。(2) 正文部分可以采用正叙、倒叙或插叙的方式来写。(3) 因为记述的事情发生在过去，所以文章的时态以过去时为主。2.布局：引出话题Everyone has something to be proud of.As for me . 具体描述事情的

4、经过 It was .; Suddenly .; However .; Luckily . 抒发感想 .I felt .【学生习作】One thing Im proud ofEveryone has something to be proud of.As for me, I well remember how I saved a boy m onths ago.Im very proud of that.It was a sunny after noon.I was reading in a park and everything seemed O K.Suddenly, something

5、terrible happened.A dog came running after a little boy.It was clear that the boy was in danger.So I shouted at the dog at once.However, the dog wasnt afraid.It wanted to bite me instead.Luckily, the dogs owner came in time.Minutes later, the boys mother arrived.After knowing what had happened, she

6、was quite moved and thanked me a lot.Seeing the relieved look of the mother, I felt very proud!【习作点评】1.习作内容完整，语言流畅，逻辑清晰，是一篇不错的文章。2.开头部分的话题引入自然流畅；故事叙述部分脉络清晰，并使用了suddenly, so, however, luckily，after等可以起连接作用的词，使得故事生动形象地呈现在了读者面前；结尾处抒发自己的感想，再次点题。3.结尾部分的句子使用了现在分词短语作状语的结构，并出现了相对高级的词汇relieved (如释重负的)，显示出作者深

7、厚的语言功底，进一步提升了习作的档次。二、写作训练假如你是某中学的一名学生。6月3日，是星期二，在放学回家的工作轿车上，你所经历的一件事让你印象深刻。请你根据以下要点用英语写一篇日记。要点如下：1.一位老爷爷和十岁左右的孙子上了车，老人拿着书包和小提琴；2.你给老人让座，老人的孙子却坐了下来，老人只得站在旁边。3.孩子大声海蜇向老人要水喝，并将空水瓶扔到车上；4.你认为孩子应该尊敬、照顾老人，保持环境整洁。参考词汇：孙子grandson 空水瓶empty bottle 尊敬respect 保持干净keepcleanJune 3, TuesdayOn my way home on the bus

8、, I saw an old man get on the bus with his grandson of about ten.He was carrying the boys schoolbag and violin.I offered my seat to the old man at once.However, the boy sat down first.The old man had to stand nearby.After a while, the boy shouted to his grandfather for water and then dropped the emp

9、ty bottle on the bus.When I saw this, I got very angry.I think the boy should not only respect and take care of the old man but also keep the environment clean.三、范文背诵My Unforgettable Middle School LifeHow times flies! My middle school life is coming to the end.I cant forget the happy time that Ive s

10、pent with my classmates and teachers.At school, I am busy with my studies.Im interested in English, because my English teacher, Miss Wang, is kind and helpful.I like playing basketball and reading books.After class, I join some clubs at school.In this way, Ive got more knowledge and improved my life

11、.I learn how to face difficulties, and I also learn how to get on well with friends.My school life is meaningful and colorful.In a word, it is unforgettable, isnt it?An Unforgettable ExamI have experienced many kinds of exam in my life, the most unforgettable of which was the final-exam last term.Be

12、fore the exam, I stayed up late in order to get a good score.The next morning I rushed to school without breakfast.In the course of the exam, I saw a very difficult problem and it took me a lot of time.I thought hard but couldnt work it out.Soon after I gave up, I fell asleep at my desk.When I woke up, the exam was over, you can imagine what happened in the end.3