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1、How to be more attractive1.To learn how to make your sentences more attractive；2.To grasp some useful sentence structures；3.To make your story more fascinating.Learning aimsIf you were a little bird saved by a human,would you fly away or stay to show gratitude?QuestionI was invited to a cookout on a

2、n old friends farm in western Washington.I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years.A noise at a window caught my attention,so I entered it.It was a hummingbird(蜂蜂鸟鸟),desperately trying to escape.She was covered in spider-webs(蛛蛛

3、网网)and was barely able to move her wings.She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.With the bird in my cupped hand,I looked around to see how she had gotten in.The broken window glass was the likely answer.I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside,closing the door secur

4、ely behind me.When I opened my hand,the bird did not fly away;she sat looking at me with her bright eyes.I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings.Still,she made no attempt to fly.Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired?Or too thirsty?As I

5、 carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle,she began to move.I stopped,and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away.Hovering(悬悬停停),she approached within six inches of my face.For a very long moment,this tiny creature looked into my eyes,turning her

6、 head from side to side.Then she flew quickly out of sight.During the cookout,I told my host the hummingbird incident.They promised to fix the window.As I was departing,my friends walked me to my car.I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering.She

7、turned from person to person until she came to me.She again looked directly into my eyes,then let out a squeaking call and was gone.For a moment,all were speechless.Then someone said,“She must have come to say good-bye.”Para.1 A few weeks later,I went to the farm again.Para.2 I was just about to lea

8、ve when the hummingbird appeared.Step 1 Corrrectwandered I wandered in the farm.I surrounded the farm.1)加形容词（可以是一个形容词，也可以是并列形容词或者形容词短语）_（满心焦虑）,I wandered in the _（充满生机的）farm.2）加副词（修饰动词、形容词、其他副词或整个句子，指的是时间、地点、程度、方式等概念）(_)I_wandered in the farm(_).Full of anxiety/overflowing with anxietyStep 2 Add I w

9、andered in the farm.lively eagerly/carefully/merrily/anxiously/excitedly 3)加介词短语1._(毫不犹豫地),I wandered in the farm.2._(出于好奇地),I wandered in the farm.Without any hesitation/a second thoughtOut of curiosity I wandered in the farm.1._（注意到一些正在快乐飞行的不知名的小鸟),I started wandering in the farm.2._（受到老朋友的启发）,I s

10、tarted wandering in the farm.4）加非谓语动词 I wandered in the farm.Noticing some unknown birds flying merrily Inspired by my old friend5）加with 复合结构/独立主格结构uwith的复合结构1._(睁大了眼睛),I wandered in the farm.u独立主格结构(身体部位+非谓语动词）_(心狂跳),I wandered in the farm.With my eyes wide openMy heart beating wildly I wandered in

11、 the farm.6）加衔接词/过渡词u表因果表因果 _（由于受到我朋友的鼓励），I wandered in the farm.u表转折表转折I wandered in the farm,_，(然而)to my disappointment,theres no sign of the little bird.u表递进表递进 I wandered in the farm,_，(此外）,I searched the woods nearby for the little bird.Due to my friends encouragehoweverwhats more I wandered in

12、 the farm.1.三大从句u定语从句 I wandered in the farm，_(我与小鸟相遇的).u名词性从句_(好奇小鸟的近况),I wandered in the farm.u状语从句（so+adj.+be+sb.+that sb did sth）我如此担忧以至于我迫不及待地在农场里来回漫步,想要再次遇到蜂鸟._where I met/encountered the little birdCurious about what would happened to the little bird So anxious was I that I couldnt wait to wa

13、nder in the farm back and forth in the hope of meeting the hummingbird again.Step 3 Upgrade2.三种特殊句_(一阵焦虑感向我袭来)，I wandered in the farm.A flood of anxiety swept over meu无灵主语句 a flood of.swept over sb 表示人感到”或“一阵/一种向某人袭来”用于该句式的有灵动词（短语）有：seize/take hold of“抓住；攫住”；get the better of/defeat“击垮”；sweep，/flood

14、，rush over“袭来”；run through/pass through“掠过”；swallow“吞噬；淹没”；choke“使哽咽,哽住”；desert“背离”escape“逃离”tear.into pieces“把撕碎”；fail“使失望；有负于”；2.三种特殊句u强调句 直到我在农场里漫步时，我才意识到我有多么思念这只小鸟。_u倒装句 我立刻开始在农场里开始漫步起来.（in no time)_In no time did I wander in the farm.It wasnt until I wandered in the farm that I realized how muc

15、h I missed the little bird.3.三种修辞手法u比喻 I wandered in the farm,_.(农场的风景美丽的如同一幅画)whose scenery were just like a paintingu夸张 I wandered in the farm,thinking _.(你一定已经等了我几个世纪了)u排比我不仅在田野里，在农场里，而且在附近的小树林里漫步了起来_“You must have waited for me for centuries”I started wandering not only in the feild，in the farm,

16、but also in the woods nearby.How to be more attractive Summary2.Add 加形容词加形容词 加副词加副词 加介词短语加介词短语 加加withwith复合结构复合结构/独立主格结构独立主格结构 加非谓语动词加非谓语动词 加衔接词加衔接词/过渡词过渡词 1.Correct订正拼写错误订正拼写错误订正语法错误订正语法错误选用更准确的选用更准确的词汇词汇 3.Upgrade 三大从句：三大从句：定、状、名定、状、名 三种特殊句：无、强、倒三种特殊句：无、强、倒 三种修辞：比、夸、排三种修辞：比、夸、排 ReadingI was invite

17、d to a cookout on an old friends farm in western Washington.I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years.A noise at a window caught my attention,so I entered it.It was a hummingbird(蜂蜂鸟鸟),desperately trying to escape.She was covere

18、d in spider-webs(蛛网蛛网)and was barely able to move her wings.She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.With the bird in my cupped hand,I looked around to see how she had gotten in.The broken window glass was the likely answer.I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside,clo

19、sing the door securely behind me.When I opened my hand,the bird did not fly away;she sat looking at me with her bright eyes.I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings.Still,she made no attempt to fly.Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired?

20、Or too thirsty?As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle,she began to move.I stopped,and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away.Hovering(悬悬停停),she approached within six inches of my face.For a very long moment,this tiny creature looked into

21、my eyes,turning her head from side to side.Then she flew quickly out of sight.During the cookout,I told my host the hummingbird incident.They promised to fix the window.As I was departing,my friends walked me to my car.I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and

22、began hovering.She turned from person to person until she came to me.She again looked directly into my eyes,then let out a squeaking call and was gone.For a moment,all were speechless.Then someone said,“She must have come to say good-bye.”nsaved a birddidnt fly awaysay good-byePara.1 A few weeks lat

23、er,I went to the farm again.Para.2 I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.plot lineemotional linesaved a birddidnt fly awaysay good-byewent to the farm againthe bird appearedjoyful/touchedsympathetic/caring shocked/amazedcurious/disappointed（grateful/attached）confused Overview of th

24、e two lines of story054 Falling action5 Ending1 Beginning(backgroud)2 Rising action saved a birddidnt fly awaysay good-byewent to the farm againthe bird appearedjoyful/touchedsympathetic/caringgrateful/attachedshocked/amazedcurious/disappointed3 ClimaxI was invited to a cookout on an old friends far

25、m in western Washington.I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years.A noise at a window caught my attention,so I entered it.It was a hummingbird(蜂蜂鸟鸟),desperately trying to escape.She was covered in spider-webs(蛛网蛛网)and was barely

26、 able to move her wings.She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.With the bird in my cupped hand,I looked around to see how she had gotten in.The broken window glass was the likely answer.I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside,closing the door securely behind me.Whe

27、n I opened my hand,the bird did not fly away;she sat looking at me with her bright eyes.I removed the sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings.Still,she made no attempt to fly.Perhaps she had been struggling against the window too long and was too tired?Or too thirsty?As I carried her up t

28、he blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle,she began to move.I stopped,and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away.Hovering(悬悬停停),she approached within six inches of my face.For a very long moment,this tiny creature looked into my eyes,turning her head from side t

29、o side.Then she flew quickly out of sight.During the cookout,I told my host the hummingbird incident.They promised to fix the window.As I was departing,my friends walked me to my car.I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center of our group and began hovering.She turned from perso

30、n to person until she came to me.She again looked directly into my eyes,then let out a squeaking call and was gone.For a moment,all were speechless.Then someone said,“She must have come to say good-bye.”Para.1 A few weeks later,I went to the farm again.Para.2 I was just about to leave when the hummi

31、ngbird appeared.Main idea:The story is about a man who saved a little bird and the bird knew how to be grateful.foreshadowing(伏笔):1.my car;2.the window of the milking house;3.the bird didnt fly away Foreshadowing(伏笔)ThinkingMain idea Discuss in groups of four.(1min)What should we mention in Para.1?1

32、.Parked the car2.Noticed the fixed window3.The hummingbird would regularly fly back to the farm4.Tried to find the hummingbird5.Waited but the hummningbird didnt appearDiscussion Clue:develop the story according to the two given sentences and the foreshadowings(1.my car;2.the window of the milking h

33、ouse;3.the bird didnt fly away)Use what weve learned to polish or rewrite Para.1Practice(5mins)评价表评价表序号序号项目项目评价标准评价标准各项目总分各项目总分评分评分1书写书写 是否卷面整洁，字体美观1 12内容内容 是否覆盖所有要点3 33行文流畅行文流畅 是否拼写有误 是否有语法错误 是否符合逻辑3 34语言丰满语言丰满 是否加入步骤2中至少三个语言点 是否有应用步骤3中至少三种句式8 8总分总分（15）Para 1.A few weeks later,I went to the farm ag

34、ain.Pulling up my car,in no time did I noticed that the track leading to the deserted milking house.Along it,several little unknown birds were flying merrily,which recalled the moment weeks ago.It wasnt until then that I realized I hadnt seen her for centuries.My heart beating wildly,taking a step n

35、earer with my eyes wide open,I noticed the brand-new window and the my friends surprised face reflected on the panes.So excited was he that gathered me in his arms tightly.He couldnt wait to share with me that the little bird regularly visited the farm.Encouraged by his words,I started wondering alo

36、ng the same path,the same milk house,the same farm.However,I failed.A flood of frustration swept over me.The sun which were just like a burning flame was sinking.I was ready to leave.Reference 停停好好车车，看看到到挤挤奶奶房房想想起起蜂蜂鸟鸟走走近近瞧瞧瞧瞧 发发现现窗窗修修好好了了 朋朋友告知近况友告知近况在农场寻找在农场寻找没找到没找到失望失望准备离开准备离开。倒装句倒装句定语从句定语从句强调句强调句+夸张夸张withwith复合结构复合结构+独立主格结构独立主格结构状语从句状语从句名词性从句名词性从句非谓语动词非谓语动词排比排比无灵主语句无灵主语句定语从句定语从句+比喻比喻As we knowPlant good cause and reap good fruit.种善因，得善果。种善因，得善果。Homework Para.2 I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.Use what weve learned to polish or rewrite Para.2Thank You!