高中英语2024届高考读后续写分类指导（自我成长篇）.doc

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1、高考英语读后续写分类指导（自我成长篇）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Thirteen can be a challenging age.Not only did I have to adapt to my changing body, I also had to deal with my parents bitter divorce, a new family and the upsetting move from my country home to a crowded suburb.When we moved, my beloved compan

2、ion, a small brown pony (小马), had to be sold.Feeling helpless and alone, I couldnt eat or sleep, and I cried all of the time.I missed my family, my home and my pony.Finally, my father, realizing how much I missed my pony, purchased an old red horse for me at a local market.My horse, Cowboy, was with

3、out a doubt the ugliest horse in the world.He was pigeon-toed and knock-kneed.But I didnt care about his faults.I loved him beyond all reason.I joined a riding club and faced rude comments and mean snickers about Cowboys looks.I never let on how I felt, but deep down inside, my heart was breaking.Th

4、e other members rode beautiful registered horses.When Cowboy and I entered the events where the horse is judged on appearance, we were quickly out of the game.I finally realized that my only chance to compete would be in the timed-speed events.I chose barrel racing (绕桶赛),an event in which a horse an

5、d its rider attempt to complete a triangular pattern around three barrels in the fastest time.One girl named Becky rode a big brown horse in the race events.She always won the blue ribbons.Needless to say, she didnt feel threatened when I competed against her at the next show.She didnt need to.I cam

6、e in next to last.The bitter memory of Beckys smirks (得意的笑)made me determined to beat her.For the whole next month, I woke up early every day and rode Cowboy five miles to the arena (运动场地).We practiced for hours in the hot sun and then I would walk Cowboy home.On the way home I would be so tired; th

7、ose five miles seemed twice as long.All of our hard work didnt make me feel confident by the time the show came.I sat at the gate and sweated it out while I watched Becky and her horse charge through the pattern of barrels, finishing the course with ease.My turn finally came._No cheers filled the ai

8、r when I finished my show._1.构思续写两段主要情节结合对故事主题、环境、人物、情节等要素的分析以及对续写第一段、第二段段首句的分析，可以构思续写第一段和第二段的主要情节。续写第一段的主要情节:I started the race and almost fell at first, but I didnt give up and tried hard with Cowboy to finish the game.续写第二段的主要情节:It was announced that I had won the competition and Becky had come i

9、n second.2.构思续写“四点”内容根据对原文的分析和两个段首句推测两段首尾部分“四点”的内容，确保段落当中和段落之间情节连贯以及文章的主题和结局积极向上。续写第一段的段首衔接句:Before I started, I heard contemptuous(轻蔑的)laughter.续写第一段的段尾衔接句:Cowboy successfully finished the last turn.续写第二段的段首衔接句:A great cheer went up from the crowd.结尾句:The blue ribbon was the best reward for our3.呼应

10、前文续写时，需要把握的一个关键词是“努力”，主要是“我”和Cowboy的努力。可以结合原文中出现的一些情节线索，推测它们在续写时可能会出现的呼应，如:For the whole next month, I woke up early every day and rode Cowboy five miles to the arena.) We practiced for hours in the hot sun.分析:这两个句子表现出为了这场比赛, “我”和Cowboy每天早早出发，顶着烈日坚持训练，体现了“我”背水一战的决心。因此在续写的部分，“我”所付出的努力也应该会有所回报，并且“我”经历

11、这次比赛之后可能会有新的感悟和成长。练习:结合文中出现的以下伏笔，预测续写部分可能发生的情节。She always won the blue ribbons.It would be announced that Cowboy and had presented the best show and won the competition.分析:前文中提到 Becky之前一直都是比赛的第一名在构思续写第二段的结局时，需要考虑这一次比赛结果是否会发生变化。考虑到原文中提到“我”和Cowboy坚持努力训练，可以设计“我”取得第一名的情节。高 分 作 文My turn finally came.The

12、whistle was blown just an instant before I squeezed Cowboys side.Unable to resist the impulse, I signaled him to move into a faster and faster trot.My white knuckles were sweating bullets as I hurtled towards the last deadly bend at 40 miles per hour.However, with a bump, Cowboy lost his balance and

13、 I took a nasty tumble.I crept up to check my old friend who was panting and trying to get up (定语从句).1gripped the rein, hobbling over to the finish line (现在分词作状语).No cheers filled the air when I finished my show.The sun was still shining (环境描写) while my body was shivering.Bowing my head (现在分词作状语)，I

14、dragged myself toward the gate with Cowboy.“Hi, you have an ugly horse,”Becky said proudly (原文协同)“But it is a nice horse too.”, Those words made my heart skip a beat and brought back memories of when we had practiced hard (心理描写).My life is a bit like barrel racing.Its challenging, but there is always something can do to adapt to it or even change it.Regardless of the outcome, at least we should give it a try (主题升华).2