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1、读读后后续续写写微微技技能能无灵主语表达情绪When we are waiting for the result,_.When we show it to our parents,_ .we will feel nervous.we will feel anxious.How to better express your nervousness?0101020203030404When we are waiting for the result,we will feel nervous.We are waiting for the result,(feeling)nervous.When we

2、 are waiting for the result,our are hammering in our chests.Nervousness us when we are waiting for the result.is taking hold ofhearts无灵主语无灵主语InanimateSubject无灵主语无灵主语英语无灵主语句是英语书面语中常见的一种典型句型和独特语言现象。“无灵主语句”概念:用无生命的事物做主语(无灵主语inanimatesubject)，如:表示抽象概念、心理感觉、事物名称或时间地点等，但谓语却常常使用“有灵动词(animateverb)-或社会团体的动作和

3、行为，这类句子常带有拟人(personification)的修辞色彩。When we are waiting for the result,our hearts are hammering in our chests.无灵主语+有灵动词读后续写和概要写作中常用到无灵主语，如1.Nightapproaching,darknessruledtheforest夜幕降临，森林里漆黑一片2.Anxietytore(撕裂)himintopieces他焦虑万分，肝肠寸断。3.Angerchoked(哽咽)mywords我气得说不出话来4.Despairtookholdofhim他很绝望5.Hiswordss

4、entmeaquiverthroughmybody.他的话让我全身不寒而栗。6.Thepasttenyearshavewitnessedaboominmyhometown.7.Whenhesawthefamiliarwriting,tearswelledupinhiseyesHow to better express your fearby using inanimatesubject?When I showed my score to my parents,_ _.When I was waiting for the result,_._when I was waiting for the

5、result.my heart was hammering in my chest /fear took hold of memy heart was hammering in my chestNervousness took hold of me How to better express your fear or nervousness?Tip1:做主语展现情绪.My _ tightened(变紧).My _ was beating wildly.My _ grew sweaty.My _ froze.My _ turned pale(苍白的).My _ were trembling/sh

6、aking.My _ went blank(空白的).heartlegspalmsfacestomachmindbody人体反应How to better express your fear or nervousness?Tip1:人体反应做主语展现情绪。3.My voice _.1.Tears _ down my face.2.Beads of sweat(汗珠)_ through my forehead.A.rolled B.streamed(流)C.lied A.pulled B.burst(迸发)C.gotA.cracked(破裂)B.laughed C.trembled(颤抖)A B

7、BA CHow to better express your fear or nervousness?Tip2:_做主语表达情绪.Fear/Nervousness took hold of me.情绪的抽象名词PanicFrightTenseAnxietyseizedcapturedswept overHorrorfilledoccupied ruled(A wave of)(1)Panicseizedher.(2)Despairchokedherwords.(3)Agreatsenseoffear/horrorfloodedoverhim.Moresentences:她突然惊慌失措她绝望得说

8、不出话来。他深感害怕/恐惧。他很紧张我们可以改成:他很焦虑。我们可以改成:HewassonervousHewasanxiousAnxietyseized/ruled/captured/caught/tookholdofhim.焦虑(这种情绪)抓住了他。(Awaveof)Excitementgaveawayto（让位给/为所代替）anxietywhenheheardmypresentsituation.Awaveofnervousnesswashedover/sweptover/floodedoverhim.一阵紧张的情绪席卷了他How to better express your fear o

9、r nervousness?Tip3:_ 做主语烘托情绪.There was not a soul(灵魂)in _ and everything was so dead-looking(死气沉沉的).An absolute(完全的)_ ruled the.(place)An absolute _ ruled the.(place)sightdarknesssilence环境描写Moresentences:Thewindisgettingupanditisbecomingcloudy.风势渐大，天空开始阴云密布。风势渐大，天空开始阴云密布。Aheavysilenceblanketedtheroo

10、m.令人尴尬的沉默笼罩了整个房间令人尴尬的沉默笼罩了整个房间Theicywindstartedhowling,cuttingmyfacelikeasharpknife.寒风开始咆哮，像锋利的刀子一寒风开始咆哮，像锋利的刀子一样刺疼我的脸。样刺疼我的脸。Theskyiscoveredwithdarkclouds.天空天空乌云滚滚、乌云滚滚、Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.Evenworse,thetemperaturesuddenlydroppeddramatically.立刻，一片漆黑笼罩森林。更糟糕的是，气温突然急剧下降。立刻，一片漆

11、黑笼罩森林。更糟糕的是，气温突然急剧下降。Thedense/thickfogblanketedthefield/city.浓雾覆盖了田野浓雾覆盖了田野/城市城市无灵主语无灵主语1.人体反应表达情绪表达情绪2.情绪的抽象名词3.环境描写Practice:read for the main idea.Jane quarreled with her husband Tom,walked into the forest by herself and got lost.She had spent a night alone in the forest.The next day,she continued

12、 finding the way out.There were helicopters(直升机),but the helicopters didnt find her.But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again._It was daybreak when Jane woke up._Practice:improve the writingBut no helicopters came and it was getting dark again.Jane was afraid.She sat by the stream,m

13、issing her family at a distance.If she hadnt quarrelled with Tom,she wouldnt be trapped in this awful place.Jane was very regretful.She wanted to say sorry to Tom for losing her temper.However,the only thing she could do was stay there and wait for help.It was getting late and Jane fell asleep.Fear/

14、Nervousness/Horror/Panic took hold of/blanketed her,tears rolling down her face.(Feeling)Desperateandhopeless,Janekneltdown,tearsstreamingdownherfaceImmediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.(Feeling)Desperateandhopeless,Janekneltdown,tearsstreamingdownherfaceBeinginthedepthofregret,Janelaydownne

15、arastone,allfantasticmemoryfloodinginhermind段一结尾：SoexhaustedandscaredwasJanethatshebecameasleepwithshiningtearsinherface.PolishyourwritingPolishyourwritingBut no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.(Feeling)Immediately,anabsolutedarknessru

16、ledtheforest.(Feeling)Desperateandhopeless,Janekneltdown,Desperateandhopeless,Janekneltdown,missingherfamilymissingherfamilyatadistance,atadistance,tearsquietlystreamingdownherface.tearsquietlystreamingdownherface.If she hadnt quarrelled with Tom,she wouldnt be trapped in this awful place.Beinginthe

17、depthofregret,Janelaydownnearastone,allBeinginthedepthofregret,Janelaydownnearastone,allfantasticmemoryfloodinginhermind.fantasticmemoryfloodinginhermind.She wanted to say sorry to Tom for losing her temper.However,the only thing she could do was stay there and wait for help.SoexhaustedandscaredwasJ

18、aneSoexhaustedandscaredwasJanethatshebecameasleepwithshiningtearsinherfacethatshebecameasleepwithshiningtearsinherface.(105).(105)It was daybreak when Jane woke up._Homework:finish the writing续写指导续写指导：注意注意衔接，时态稳定，不再添加新的情节，对话精简内容建议内容建议：环境描写+情绪描写/心理描写+动作描写+正能量结局建议结局建议：Tom找到Jane或者飞机发现她让他们夫妻团圆，皆可教学后记：教学

19、后记：无灵主语的表达还有很多，今天只是学习如无灵主语的表达还有很多，今天只是学习如何表达焦虑害怕恐惧这些情绪，像喜悦，兴何表达焦虑害怕恐惧这些情绪，像喜悦，兴奋，惊讶等情绪的表达，希望同学们在今后奋，惊讶等情绪的表达，希望同学们在今后的学习中能举一反三，多积累，勤记忆及重的学习中能举一反三，多积累，勤记忆及重运用运用 有意识地加强无灵主语语料的积累并学有意识地加强无灵主语语料的积累并学会运用表达。为英语写作增添写作亮点。会运用表达。为英语写作增添写作亮点。THANK YOU！参考范文：参考范文：Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.F

20、eelingunbearablycoldandextremelyexhausted,Janewasquiteatalossastohowtocopewiththeterriblesituation.Shecoulddonothingbutkeepongoingtofindanopenplace,prayingthatthehelicopterwouldcomeagain.Nevertheless,therewasnotasoulinsightandeverythingwassodead-looking.Beinginthedepthofdespair,Janetriedinvaintokeep

21、backhertearsandpromisedherselfthatshewouldbynomeansquarrelwithTomagain.SoweakwasJanethatshelayonthegroundandfellasleepagain.ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Tohergreatjoy,ahelicopterwasjustrightoverherhead.Sheyelledwithallherstrengthinadesperateattempttofreeherself.Thistime,luckily,Janewasspottedandultim

22、atelysavedbythepeopleinthehelicopter.Thenshewassenttothelocalpolicestation.AtthefrontdoorstoodherdearhusbandwhosufferedgreatanxietywhenJanewasnowheretobefound.Tearsofjoyandreliefwelledupastheyfinallyheldeachothertightly.Janesyellowblousewasbadlywornoutbutthatsnobigdeal.Whatwasmoresignificantwasthatt

23、heystartedtoknowthatcompromisewouldalwaysbethebestpolicy.主语主语：face脸，laughter笑声等对应的动词有对应的动词有:lightup(照亮)，brighten(照亮)，linger(继续存留)，wellup(涌出)，flash等词。例句:(1)Herfacelitup/brightenedwhenlgaveherthepresent.我给她礼物时，她的脸上焕发出了光彩。(2)Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.笑声在房间里紫绕。(3)Whenhesawthefamiliarhandwriting,tear

24、swelledupinhiseyes.他一看到熟悉的字迹，便热泪盈眶。Herfacewasshiningwithjoy.Hiseyestwinkledwithmerriment.Hersmilelitupthewholeroom.Herheartleapedwithjoy.Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.Underthesun,hiseyeswereassleepasapondofwater,flashingstrongoff-confidence.她的脸上洋溢着喜悦他高兴得双眸闪闪发光她的笑容照亮了整个房间她的心欢喜的怦怦直跳她激动得满脸通红阳光

25、下，他的目光像潭水般深沉，闪现出一种强烈的自信。Moresentences:Aheavysilenceblanketedtheroom.令人尴尬的沉默笼罩了整个房间令人尴尬的沉默笼罩了整个房间Theskyisdottedwithstars.天空中繁星密布天空中繁星密布Thebeachwasbathedintheamber-likesunlight.海滩沐浴在琥珀色的阳光里海滩沐浴在琥珀色的阳光里Theswollen/risingriverfloodedtheroadanddestroyedtreesandhouses,ruiningeverythingintheway.上涨的河水淹没了道路，破

26、坏树木和房屋，毁掉沿途的一切上涨的河水淹没了道路，破坏树木和房屋，毁掉沿途的一切Thesmelloftheseacalledupmemoriesofherchildhood.大海的气味勾起了她对童年的回忆大海的气味勾起了她对童年的回忆Moresentences:高中常见情感类的词及其转化:v./adj.n.admire-admiration;amaze-amazement;annoy-annoyanceangry-anger;anxious-anxiety;astonish-astonishment;bitter-bitterness;bore-boredom;delight-delight;

27、despair-despair;disappoint-disappointment;joy-joy;embarrass-embarrassment;eager-eagerness;happy-happiness;horrify-horror;lonely-loneliness;puzzle-puzzlement;regret-regret;relieve-relief;sad-sadnesssatisfy-satisfaction;shame-shamesorry-sorrow;surprise-surprise.在这些情感名词之后，带上动词如seize(侵袭)，choke(使哽咽)，floo

28、d(使大受感动，充满)，creep(不知不觉地产生)，grip(紧抓)，givewayto(被替代).desert,tearcomeover,wellup,takepossessionof等，就能写出精彩的情感无灵主语句。无灵主语种类(Observe&Summarize)Group3:Thethickfogblanketedthefield.Anearthquakecamelikeatheftinthenight，withoutwarningTherainpreventedtouristsfromenjoyingthefullmoonSummary4:主语是表示_等名词常见谓语:blanket

29、,come,bring,prevent,strike,hit,threaten等词。无灵主语种类(Observe&Summarize)Group4:Herfacelitup/brightenedwhenIgaveherthepresent.Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.Whenhesawthefamiliarlandwriting,tearswelledupinhiseyesSummary4:主语是表示_-_的名调常见的谓语:lightup,brighten.linger(继续存留).wellup(涌出),fail,flash等词无灵主语种类(Observe&Summarize)Group5:AterriblethoughtsuddenlystruckmeThesightofthescenefilledmewithhorrorSummary5:主语是表示的名词常见的表示行为或动作的名词有sight,thought,glance,look,idea,feeling等常见谓语:strike,arouse(唤起)，remind,delight,frighten,stun(使震惊),overwhelm压倒)等词。