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1、读后续写：游泳接力比赛下水救人续写原文阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一 篇完整的短文。The air was thick with humidity （潮湿）inside the swimming pool hall as Elisha paced nervously near the starting blocks. The faint traces of chlorine（氯气）in the air stung（刺痛her eyes,but these were mild concerns compared to the matter which seemed

2、largest in her mind:the outcome of the state semifinals.The young 16-year-old had trained hard and dedicated her entire life so far toward swimming.Almost as soon as she could walk, Elisha had taken like a fish to the water and gave her whole body,mind and spirit to the sport.She always loved being

3、in the water,whether to cool off on a hot summerrs day or to forget about her troubles at school - the waves simply carried it all away. But for Elisha, swimming was not merely for recreation. Her father, a retired athlete-turned-coach in his own right always pushed Elisha to find out the extent of

4、her talents and abilities.Her whole family, in fact;were full of amateur and professional athletes, especially her older brothers and sisters who had gone on to play in the NCSA at university.There was no way she could let them all down. Not here, and not now. Finally,the time had come:the 400-meter

5、 1110（116丫（?昆合泳）=0匕丫,111 a team of four swimmers,she was the last one to go in the relay.lt would be all on her to finish out strong and secure first place for her team.She had done well in the swimming meet so far,but this last relay would determine whether she and her team would move on to the sta

6、te finals.lt all came down to her to bring it home.At the sound of the buzzerthe swimmers all dove into the water. Kaycee with the freestyle stroke,Lizzie with the breaststroke, and finally Susan with the backstroke.Elishars heart pounded as she readied herself for take off.By PATRICK ROBERT MCCARTH

7、Y,21st Century Teens注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .请按如下格式在相应位置作答。Just as Susan was coming in close, a small child fell into the deep end of the pool.Elisha,out of breath, pulled herself up out of the pool,注意：素材分析主要人物：Elisha故事线：Elisha热爱游泳，他的父亲是一名教练，她的家人也都是业 余或者专业选手，她希望在这场混合游泳接力比赛中取得好成绩，最后进 入全国决赛！在队友即将接棒，轮到

8、她上场的时候，一个小孩掉入了泳池 中！主题：生命第一，比赛第二续写方向：第一段可以续写Elisha立刻跳入水中营救落水的小孩。虽 然其他队已经远超自己队，但是秉着体育精神她还是坚持完赛！第二段可 以续写Elisha精疲力尽上岸后失落内疚，但是队友的支持，观众的呐喊， 父亲的信任，最重要的被营救的小孩，让Elisha意识到，这些东西比赢得 比赛更有价值！续写范文Just as Susan was coming in close, a small child fell into the deep end of the pooh Almost as if by instinct, Elisha tu

9、rned her attention to the child crying for help in the water. True to her fish-like speed, in one swift motion Elisha scooped the child up and out of the water. Turning to face her lane, Elisha sped back through the water to her starting position and then made her way toward the finish line.Elisha,

10、out of breath, pulled herself up out of the pool. With the last ounce of her energy giving out, her father and her teammates came running over to help her to her feet and - to her amazement - heard a loud cheer erupt from the crowd. When Elisha heard the news that her team finished last in the final

11、 event, she nearly broke down into tears. But her dad gave her a big hug and told her that its all right - she will always be a winner in his heart, no matter what.下水文Just as Susan was coming in close, a small child fell into the deep end of the pool. Almost as if by instinct, taking a deep breath,

12、Elisha plunged into the water in a split second, quickly locating the boy who was struggling to stay afloat. With swift strokes, Elisha managed to scoop the child up in time and out of the water. The other teams were already far ahead now. Still, summoning up her remaining strength, Elisha swiftly s

13、ped back to her starting position and swam her way towards the finish line, doing her utmost. It came as no surprise that Elishas team came last.Elisha, out of breath, pulled herself up out of the pool. With the last ounce of her energy giving out, Elisha collapsed onto the ground, immense disappoin

14、tment and guilt consuming her. Her dad and teammates came running over to help her to her feet, praising her for her swift action. And - to her amazement -a loud cheer erupted from the crowd. Nodding at her affectionately, Dad gave her a big thumb-up, saying she will always be a winner in his heart, no matter what. Desperate though Elisha was for the win, it paled in comparison to the life saved, the support from her teammates and Dads absolute trust in her.