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1、综 合改错(Errors Correction)：一、语法错误二、词汇错误三、逻辑错误四、多词少词Example:Television is rapidly becoming the literatureof our periods. Many of the arguments1,time/times/agehavingused for the study for literature as a2,/school subject are valid for A study of television.3.the一、语法错误1、平行结构(not only.but alsoboth.andeith

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3、) The children attended a small elementary school (often of just one room) to that they had to walk every day, possibly for a few miles, which, that前只能有except和in。 except that除止匕以夕卜;in that因为, 体现在3) It will be interesting to discover how many young people go to universities without any idea of that t

4、hey are going to do afterward, what, what相当于the thing that4) It appears that we all find company in sound, if we demand a little quiet from time to time, but或yet转折，所以不能用if5) They are likely to travel more and to want more education. Nevertheless, many more jobs are available in these services. There

5、fore或So因果3、分词错误1) Polices records show a surprisedlink between changes in the seasons and crime patterns, surprising2) Even the quiet of our careful protected wilderness areas can be invaded at any moment by a passedjet. passing3) So a sportsmans individual way of walking with raised shoulders is im

6、itated by an admiredfan. admiring4、指代错误1) A break in their employment, or a decision to work part time, will slowitsraises and promotions-as it would for men. their2) Clearly some risks are worth taking, especially when the rewards are high: a man surrounded by flames and smoke generally considers t

7、hat jumping out of a second-floor window is an acceptable risk to save its life, his3) The modern light-house also identifies it in a code known to all ships, itself主语宾语相重叠用反身代词5、形容词、副词(略)6、谓语错误(主谓一致、时态、语态)1) Business today whether it is running a little gas-station or a big factory takegood managem

8、ent.ftakes2) Advances in technology has also changed peoples lives, have3) But if 98 percent of us doesntneed to work, what are we going to do with ourselves? dont复数4) Whether women who have started a career will attain pay equality with men rest on at least two factors, rests句子做主语为单数5) In some plac

9、es all the trees havecut down, have been二、词汇错误(搭配错误、用词错误)三、逻辑错误(肯定否定乱用)1) Blood pressure drugs definitely help some people live after a heartattack, but these same drugs may be both necessaryand harmful for those with only mild blood pressure problems, unnecessary2) In every case, the influential pe

10、rson may consciouslynotice the imitation but he will feel comfortable in its presence, unconsciously四、多词少词(少介词、冠词、形式宾语；多介词和副词)1) When two Americans meet for first time, it is normal for them to call each other by their given name immediately, the first2) In fact, until recently seawater has almost be considered to be useless and no value, of no