专题14 -2021年上海卷英语真题作文深度点评与满分作文赏析.docx

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1、专题14-2021年上海卷高考英语真题作文深度点评与满分作文赏析【试题再现2021年春季高考真题】Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假如你是明启中学的高三学生王佳，你学校的教师Lucy准备在高中开设关于“信息素养”(information literacy)的课程。课程包含以下四个板块:“网站设计”、“大数据处理”、“辨别真伪信息”和“精确搜索信息”。现在向全体同学征求建议。请你给她写一份电子邮件，要求:1.

2、 选择两个你感兴趣的板块;2. 说明为什么选择这个板块的理由。【试题解读】背景：学校将要开设“信息素养”课程 (information literacy course)任务：1) 作出选择：（关联性较强/自己有所了解的容易写）a. “网站设计”（web design)b. “大数据处理”（big data processing)c. “精确搜索信息”（smart internet searching)d. “辨别真伪信息”（information credibility evaluation)2) 给出理由：（可以从兴趣爱好、日常经历或社会现象写起）a. “网站设计”：通过建立自己的网站来宣传

3、自己喜欢的事物或者推广一些公益性的活动，并且能够在移动设备上浏览。b. “大数据处理”：课题研究要做调査、或者对于一些社会现象想要了解更多，甚至作为大学专业方向提前学起来。c. “精确搜索信息”：平时接触到太多无效、误导或营销信息，希望能够省时省力、快速定位到自己需要的内容。d. “辨别真伪信息”：读新闻报道或科普文章不能确定真实性，仅靠权威信息源和常识未必够用（可以提疫情期间和社交媒体)。注意：邮件是写给老师的，所以语句措辞稍微正式一点。信息补充:课程核心：信息素养Information literacy is the set of integrated abilities includin

4、g the reflective discovery of information, the understanding of how information is produced and valued, and the use of information in creating new knowledge and participating in communities of learning.课程板块：“网站设计”(web design):Web design is the process of planning, conceptualizing, and arranging cont

5、ent online. Today, designing a website goes beyond aesthetics to include the websites overall functionality. It also includes web apps, mobile apps, and user interface design.“大数据处理”(big data processing):Big data processing is a set of techniques or programming models to access large-scale data to e

6、xtract useful information for supporting and providing decisions. It is typically defined and characterized through the five Vs (volume, velocity, variety, validity, value).“精确搜索信息”(smart internet searching):Smart internet searching is about refining search methods for higher accuracy so as to pinpo

7、int the desired results quickly. It involves applying certain advanced search techniques, maximizing the potential of search engines.“辨别真伪信息”(information credibility evaluation):Information credibility evaluation is the means to distinguish reliable from unreliable information. To determine whether

8、the information is credible，one should check such things as the sources authority, accuracy, objectivity, currency, and coverage.【满分范文欣赏1】Dear Lucy,My name is Wang Jia. a senior 3 student at Mingqi High School.Im deeply interested in the course in information literacy that youre planning to launch.S

9、o Im writing this email to inform you of my choice of the two sections Id like to learn about which are smart internet searching and information credibility evaluationTo begin with Ive based my decision on the expectation that the combination of the two sections can lead me to my desired results.Its

10、. in my view self-evident that searching for the information I need and ensuring the authenticity of its content are interconnectedIn addition, in todays digitalized world and with the expansion of social media information is everywhere and misinformation is prevalent.The challenge then is to separa

11、te fact from falsehood, efficiently and effectively Take practical preventive measures in the case of COVID-19 as an example-the general public can be easily overwhelmed by a host of seemingly identical and potentially false news reports.Consequently,if properly instructed in the basic skills of usi

12、ng information technology, including how to pinpoint what Im looking for and to verify that what Ive found is valid I may be better prepared next time when in urgent need of accurate informationIn a nutshell in the hope of improving my information literacy level I expect to learn more from your cour

13、se about the information world and the ways in which to safely navigate through it with ease.Thank you for your time and have a great day.Looking forward to hearing from you Best regards, Wang Jia【满分范文欣赏2】Dear Lucy,Having learnt you are to set up a course on information literacy,which will cover Web

14、site Design, Big Data Processing,Information Identification and Information Search, and that you are collecting the students opinions, La Senior Three student,am writing to show my strong support for your initiative and voice my preference to the latter two modules.The reasons why I favour Informati

15、on Identification and Information Search can be seenin three aspects. To begin with,regarding the large quantity of fake news and informationonline, which has been deceptive and misleading enough it is critical to identify the genuineinformation and become well informed. In addition in the contempor

16、ary society whereinformation explodes on a daily basis one is required to access information as swiftly andaccurately as possible if he is to gain an advantage in his life and work.Last but not least,compared with the other two, these two modules,it seems to me, appear closer to the theme ofinformat

17、ion literacyTo sum up, your course, especially with the latter two modules will definitely enable us students to distinguish between genuine and fake news search for information moreefficiently and thus develop solid information literacy without which a modern citizen cannotget adapted to the future

18、 society.Yours truly, Wang Jia【满分范文欣赏3】Dear Lucy,Having noticed that our school is setting up a new curriculumInformation Literacy, which has four parts, including Website Design, Big Data Processing, Authenticity of information, Accurate check of information, I would like to choose Authenticity of

19、information and Accurate check of information. There are some reasons for my choice. Firstly, Information Literacy is the ability to know when there is a need for information, to be able to identify, locate, evaluate, and effectively use that information for the issue or problem at hand. Secondly, I

20、t is so important for students to distinguish a real story from a fake one given the mass of information available on the web. Thirdly, Authenticity of information and Accurate check of information are not just about a technology that we should acquire, instead learning them is about an attitude and

21、 moral accomplishment, which require us to cultivate from childhood. As for Website Design, Big Data Processing, they are just technology tools, we could know about them at anytime if you want to master them.To sum up, we should keep pace with the times and technology to improve our ability to ident

22、ify and filter information. The future era requires us not only to find numerous information, but more importantly, to identify the truly useful information.Yours，Wang Jia【满分范文欣赏4】Dear Lucy,My name is Wang Jia, a senior 3 student at Mingqi High School. Im deeply interested in the course in informati

23、on literacy that youre planning to launch. So Im writing this email to inform you of my choice of the two sections Id like to learn about, which are smart internet searching and information credibility evaluation.To begin with, Ive based my decision on the expectation that the combination of the two

24、 sections can lead me to my desired results. Its, in my view, self-evident that searching for the information I need and ensuring the authenticity of its content are interconnected.In addition, in todays digitalized world and with the expansion of social media, information is everywhere and misinfor

25、mation is prevalent. The challenge then is to separate fact from falsehood, efficiently and effectively. Take practical preventive measures in the case of COVID-19 as an example-the general public can be easily overwhelmed by a host of seemingly identical and potentially false news reports.Consequen

26、tly, if properly instructed in the basic skills of using information technology, including how to pinpoint what Im looking for and to verify that what Ive found is valid, I may be better prepared next time when in urgent need of accurate information.In a nutshell, in the hope of improving my informa

27、tion literacy level, I expect to learn more from your course about the information world and the ways in which to safely navigate through it with ease.Thank you for your time and have a great day. Looking forward to hearing from you.Best regards,Wang Jia【满分范文欣赏5】Dear Lucy,Having learnt you are to se

28、t up a course on information literacy, which will cover Website Design, Big Data Processing, Information Identification and Information Search, and that you are collecting the students opinions, I, a Senior Three student, am writing to show my strong support for your initiative and voice my preferen

29、ce to the latter two modules.The reasons why I favour Information Identification and Information Search can be seen in three aspects. To begin with, regarding the large quantity of fake news and information online, which has been deceptive and misleading enough, it is critical to identify the genuin

30、e information and become well informed. In addition, in the contemporary society where information explodes on a daily basis, one is required to access information as swiftly and accurately as possible if he is to gain an advantage in his life and work. Last but not least, compared with the other tw

31、o, these two modules, it seems to me, appear closer to the theme of information literacy.To sum up, your course, especially with the latter two modules, will definitely enable us students to distinguish between genuine and fake news, search for information more efficiently and thus develop solid inf

32、ormation literacy, without which a modern citizen cannot get adapted to the future society.Yours truly,Wang Jia【试题再现2021年秋季高考真题】Guided Writing:Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假如你是明启中学的高三学生李华，收到国外朋友Bill的邮件，告诉你他准备学习汉语。现有两门课

33、程供选祥，详细信息如下表，想咨询一下你的意见。请你写一封电子邮件给Bill，内容包括：1)建议选择的课程名称；2)通过二者比较，你推荐该门课程的理由。课程名称汉语听说汉语读写课程内容日常会话故事读写授课安排每周一、周四晚7:00-8:30，共8周每周五晚7:00-8:30，共16周授课语言全中文中英双语【试题解读】审题: 格式是书信文内容:比较常规的形式，二选一的建议文，表格里面的内容要一一阐明后再给出建议和理由。整体的内容相对比往年的写作要简单一些。在建议中则需要给出对应的理由，理由中要有明确的对比。同类题材:2018年 1月上海高考假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，你校计划引进一个机器人担任餐厅

34、服务员或者图书馆管理员，并在英语贴吧征求学生意见，你很感兴趣，决定回帖响应，你所写的内容应包括:1你认为机器人适合担任的一个岗位，二选一2. 通过比较，阐述你选择的理由，可以从工作效率，服务范围等方面进行表述。【满分范文欣赏1】Dear Bill,Having learnt you are planning to study the Chinese language and that you cannot decide whether to opt for the Listening and Speaking course or the Reading and Writing one, I,

35、as a Chinese native speaker, am writing to put forward my own idea that the first option might be more suitable for you. The reasons behind the choice, as far as I can see, can be analyzed in three aspects. To begin with, as is universally acknowledged, listening and sneaking is the very beginning a

36、nd foundation of learning a language, be it the mother tongue or a foreign language. In addition, regarding the course is given twice a week, leaning a foreign language intensively has been proved more effective by linguists. Last but not least, that the teaching language is Chinese only shall force

37、 you to listen attentively and speak earnestly, ensuring a fast progress in language skillsTo sum up, the Listening and Speaking course will prove to be more relevant effective and efficient. which, by contrast, cannot be achieved by the Reading and Writing course. It is, therefore, advisable that y

38、ou choose the former. Hope the above might be of any help to you Thank you for your time and wish you a great success in learning Chinese. Best regards, Li Hua【满分范文欣赏2】Dear Bill,Glad to have heard from you. Im delighted to share some of my opinions with you about your choice. Compared with the Chine

39、se Reading and Writing Course, the Chinese Listening and Speaking Course should be given priority. My reasons are as follows.To begin with, the Chinese Listening and Speaking Course is more pragmatic and a relatively simple course for beginners and you wont experience a tough and discouraging time a

40、t first, which, on the contrary, can activate your motivation and confidence in Chinese learning. In addition, listening and speaking are both basic skills when it comes to learning a new language, both of which are comparatively practical in our daily communication. Whats more, students can spare o

41、nly eight weeks to finish this course, which is half of the other courses duration, so there is no denying that this is pretty rewarding and considerate for those full-time employees like you. Last but not least, totally taught in Chinese rather than bilingual Chinese and English, this course serves

42、 as a golden opportunity for foreigners to experience a completely different language atmosphere through practising its daily conversation content and materials.It is of great joy if my advice could help you, and I hope that you will have great fun in your Chinese learning.Yours,Li Hua【满分范文欣赏3】Dear

43、Bill:Glad to hearing from you,and Im delighted to share some my opinions with you.Compared with the Chinese Reading and Writing Course, I would like to recommend the Chinese Listening and Speaking Course.To begin with, Chinese Listening and Speaking Course is more pragmatic and a relatively simple c

44、ourse for beginners and you wont experience a tough and discouraged time at first which, on the contrary, can activate your motivation and confidence in Chinese learning. In addition, listening and speaking are both basic skills when it comes to learning a new language which are comparatively practi

45、cal in our daily communication. Whats more, students can only spare 8 weeks to finish this course which is half of the other courses duration so there is no denying that this is pretty rewarding and considerate for those full-time employees like you. Last but notleast, totally taught in Chinese rath

46、er than bilingual Chinese and English, it is a golden opportunity for foreigners to experience a completely different language atmosphere through practicing its daily conversation contents and materials.It is of great joy if my advice could help you and I hope you will have great fun in your Chinese

47、 learning.Yours, Li Hua【满分范文欣赏4】Dear Bill,On hearing that you are faced with a dilemma of acquiring Chinese, Im writing to you to offer my proposal Contrarily speaking, signing up for Survival Chinese will earn your favor for reasons as follows.First. from your former letters, you said you used to b

48、e stuck in your throat. As is shown in the table, the course for listening and speaking, whose contents cover the themes of daily dialogues, is just fitting in your wish. While the other one isnt, which just targets stories reading and writing. So, why not take this chance to overcome this fright in your daily communication with others?Also, it is obvious that Chinese literacy starting on every Sunday evenings, are of two months duration, twice of the spoken one, which you should attend from Monday evening to Thursday evening. Meanwhile, a tight schedule can add a brilliant