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1、专题102020年全国II卷&III卷【试题再现2020年全国II卷】 上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括：1. 农场情况;2. 采摘过程;3. 个人感受。注意：1. 词数 100 左右;2. 题目已为你写好。My Weekend _【试题解读】该书面表达题目要求介绍自己所参加的一次日常课外活动。结构最好采用三段成文：第一段引出话题；第二段具体交代展览活动的内容、时间及地点等；第三段写出感想。 时态：以一般将来时和一般现在时为主。人称：第一人称。注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅，并且适当使用一些高级词汇和句型以提高作文档次。【常用词汇短

2、语】1.inform. of.2.in the coming days3.invite . to .4. have a deeper understanding of .5.enjoy .given by6.perform some plays7. a drama feast for.8.develop our interest municate with10.emphasized the importance of.11.fall on12.in memory of13.in honour of14.a three-day vacation15.go on holiday/take a va

3、cation16.celebrate the festival17.have fun with sb【常用句型结构】1. its aim is to raise our awareness of.2.The purpose is to practice .3. All the members of the students are required to attend it. 4.We also have some wonderful activities for you, such as: 5.The activity will last from . to . 6. are invited

4、 to join too. 7.All the participants are supposed to . 8.Please make full preparations for it and come on time.【满分范文欣赏1】My weekendLast weekend, I took part in a picking activity in a remarkable modern farm with several classmates, which has impressed and inspired all of us. With green vegetables and

5、 fruits, the farm covers an area of 2,000 acres, where advanced technology is used for efficient farming. After a short instruction of the staff, we were divided into two groups to do the picking work separately. Not only did we collect vegetables and fruits, but we also ate some fresh fruits there.

6、 Through this activity, I felt it personally how hard the farmers work and treasuring everything we own shouldnt just a slogan! Besides, I really appreciate this opportunity to get close to nature. What a meaningful day it is. 【满分范文欣赏2】My WeekendOrganized by the student union, a group of volunteers

7、went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. The farm is situated at the foot of a mountain, the sky is blue and the air is fresh. We were attracted by the beautiful scenery. There are different kinds of fruit trees as well as a variety of animals.On arriving, we saw red ripe pea

8、ches hanging on the tree. Using baskets and ladders, We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and soft. I couldnt wait to take a bite, and the sweet juice went down my throat.I was grateful for this opportunity to get close to nature. Not only would I be

9、able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness!【满分范文欣赏3】My WeekendIn order to give the students a taste of farm life, our school organized a fruit-picking activity on a farm last weekend.We sang and laughed all the way to the farm. The moment we reached there, we were gree

10、ted with the twittering of birds and the fragrance of flowers. Bathed in warm sunshine, we started picking fruits. Although our clothes were soaked with sweat, we had a great time! Seeing our fruits of labor packed and loaded onto the truck, we felt a great sense of accomplishment.This fruit-picking

11、 experience impresses on us the importance of labor and the saying “No pains, no gains”【满分范文欣赏4】My WeekendLast weekend, my class went to Xishan Farm to pick fruits and experience the labor life.The farm is located in a nature reserve. When we reached there, we were divided into different teams and h

12、ad a picking contest. According to the rule, the group to pick the most fruits with the best quality will win. We started the contest with excitement. Since the best fruits were always high on the tree, we needed cooperation throughout the contest.The picking lasted all morning. Tired though we were

13、, all our efforts paid off. Through this activity, we realize the value of teamwork and that it is the process rather than the result that really counts! What a meaningful experience!【满分范文欣赏5】My WeekendLast weekend, my classmates and I went strawberry-picking in an orchard, which enjoys high popular

14、ity with locals.Early in the morning, we set out from the school and biked to the orchard with excitement. In a flash, there we were, because the destination was just within walking distance. Upon arrival, I was overwhelmed by a sea of fresh berries. They were so inviting that I couldnt resist makin

15、g a dart for them. Along with my classmates, I engaged in the battle for the biggest and prettiest strawberry. The moment we spotted something giant, we just popped up and grabbed it. Bathed in the gentle sunshine, we could have a bite of any berries we liked, only leaving “The Big One”. You can pic

16、ture how thrilled we were!This awesome activity not only helped us gain hands-on experience, but also made us well aware of the significance of labor. I just love it! 【试题再现2020年全国III卷】假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编一个短剧，请你写一封邮件给外教miss Evans，请他指导你们。邮件内容包括：1. 情节简介；2.指导内容；3.商定时间和地点。 _【试题解读】该书面表达本篇书面表达属于应用文-求助信。要求考

17、生写一封邮件，请求外教 Miss Evans对于the Steamboat改编短剧的支持。根据提示，时态应为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。结构：总分总法，即第一段说明写这封邮件目的；第二段详细说明英语戏剧的剧情介绍和指导内容细节问题；第三段表达感谢，并期待早日得到回复。 【常用词汇】1.havetrouble/difficulty(in)doingsth. 做某事有困难2.dosb. afavor/givesb. ahand 给某人帮助3.askforhelp/seekforhelp 寻求帮助4.encountersomeproblems 遇到一些问题5.bebusy/occupied/

18、engagedindoingsth.忙于做某事7.makepreparationsfor.为某事做准备9.put.inuse 学以致用10.letsb. down 让某人失望11.overcomethefear克服恐惧12.beanxious/eagertodosth./longtodosth.渴望做某事13.takethetroubletodosth. 费心地去做某事14.offersomeconstructiveguidance提供一些有益的指导15.begrateful/thankful/appreciativetosb.forsth.因某事感激某人【常用句型结构】1. Now I am

19、 writing to ask you to give me a hand/do me a favor/lend me a hand.现在我写信请你帮我一个忙。2. I am writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor.我希望你能帮我一个忙。3. I wonder ifyoucoulddome a fvour, this is the first time that my uncle visits us.我想知道你是否能帮我一个忙，因为这是.。4. Would you like to do me a fav

20、or to .你是否能够帮个.6. I am encountering three problems which trouble me a lot.我遇到了使我困惑的问题。7. To begin with, Whats more, What troubles me most is 8. Unfortunately,Ifind/feelitquite/extremely difficult/hard to do with.不幸的是，我发现很难处理/对待.9. I havetrouble/difficulty/problems(in)doingsth.我在.遇到了困难10. Facedwithth

21、eaboveproblems,Iamanxioustogetyourhelp. 面对以上困难，我渴望得到你的帮助。11. I wonder if can help me with these difficulties. 我很想知道，你是否能够帮助我解决这些困难。12. I would appreciate it very much if you can offer me some necessary/timely help(give/lend me some practical/valuable advice)如果你能给我一些必要的帮助/及时的帮助（给我一些实用的/有价值的建议）。我会很感激。

22、【满分范文欣赏1】Dear Miss Evans,Our play based on the text Drawing a horse tells a story of a king and an artist. In the story, the king asked the artist to draw him a beautiful horse. The king waited for more than a year before getting it, and misunderstood the artist, and in the end forgave him because o

23、f his effort to spend over a year drawing it better. We struggle with the lines of the play, and we tumble over some pronunciations. I hope you can come to a rehearsal next Wednesday afternoon in the school hall and give us some advice.Im looking forward to your reply. Sincerely Yours, Li Hua【满分范文欣赏

24、2】Dear Miss Evans:I am Li Hua, and Im writing to ask if you could help me and my classmates in changing our text into a short play. Our play will be based on an ancient Chinese story Be there just to make up the number. In the play, the old king treated his musician very well. A man named Nanguo man

25、aged to become a member of the kings band. During the band played together, Nanguo just pretended to play and made no sound. Nobody realized. After the old king died, his son, the new ruler, preferred solo so that he ordered the musicians to play one by one. Therefore, Nanguo had to run out of the p

26、alace. We will have a rehearsal next Friday afternoon in the school hall, and we hope you can come and give us some advice. Please consider our request. I look forward to your reply.SincerelyLi Hua【满分范文欣赏3】Dear Miss Evans,How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regardin

27、g a play we adapted according to the textbook. Wed like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a s

28、cared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we dont want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visi

29、t at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?Given your busy schedule, Id be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!Yours truly,Li Hua【满分范文欣赏4】Dear Miss Evans, I was wondering if you could help me revise a short play

30、adapted from our English textbook. The plot of the tragic story is about Lady Meng jiang and her husband, who lived more than 2000 years ago in ancient China.At their wedding,her husband was taken away forcefully to bulid the Great wall.Meng jiang went to look for her husband, only to learn of his d

31、eath. Then she cried at the Great Wall，causing it to fall apart. Could you kindly give me guidance on two aspects? First of all, could you check the language for us? Secondly, if you could please give us some direction on our acting and use of tone?If possible, could I meet you in your office at 10

32、am? We are looking forward to your reply.Yours,LiHua【满分范文欣赏5】Dear Miss Evans,Im writing to ask for your guidance on how to adapt an English fiction into a stage play. As you know, “Drama Night” is upon us, for which we have chosen the text entitled The Lord of the Rings. This fantasy story we favor

33、is set in the fictional world of Middle Earth, where the Dark Lord Sauron seeks to consolidate his already immense power by reclaiming the One Ring that he has lost. After a series of fierce fights, the One Ring is finally destroyed, which triggers the death of Sauron.Despite a ton of script revisio

34、n, we are now still in a dilemma about balancing the limited show time against the relatively complicated plots of the original. Could you please set aside some time and give us explicit instruction? We wonder if you are available at your office at 2pm this Wednesday. If not, please set a time and a place that suit you well.We are looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua