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1、2023年新高考英语读后续写提分技能2.16 热点话题表达微技能6(脱险经历+心理综合刻画)素材积累1描写恐惧心理的方法第一部分 表示恐惧1.他心跳较快，想都没有想，他就开始跑了。His heart beat wildly and without thinking, he started to run. 2.他突然闪现一丝恐惧。 The thought of fear crossed his mind.3.突然一阵恐惧控制了他，他吓得呆在原地。他试着移动，但是却不能，直到一个尖锐的声音唤醒了他。A sudden rush of panic ruling him, he was frozen t

2、o the spot. He tried hard to move，but could not, until a sharp sound awoke him. 4.Mac 心跳得很快，双手颤抖。他的脸变得惨白，眼里充满了恐惧。Macs heart was beating wildly/violently /was pounding and his hands were shaking. His face turned pale and eyes were full of horror. 5.他因恐惧而呆住，站在那儿一动不动。Frozen with fear, he stood rooted t

3、o the spot.6.一看到凶猛的狼，我吓得僵住了，吓得一动也不敢动。At the sight of the fierce wolf, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch. 7.他被恐惧吓倒了，Mac 不知道要说什么？Overwhelmed by fear, Mac didnt know what to say/do. (be overwhelmed by 被.给压垮/吓倒/征服)8.一种惊恐的感觉掠过他的心头。 A frightened feeling crept/ swept/ over his heart.9.他心中涌起了一

4、阵恐惧。/ 恐惧席卷了他。 A flood of fear welled up in him. /Fear flooded over him. 10. 她因恐惧而窒息。She was choked with fear.11. 时间似乎停止了，尽管他们可能只在那儿二至三分钟。Time seemed to stand still, though they were probably there for only two or three minutes.第二部分 应对恐惧1.一股力量立刻取代了Jane不断增长的恐惧和焦虑。A sense of strength immediately replac

5、ed the mounting fear and anxiety in Janes mind.2.他的大脑又开始快速转动，尽力想着.His mind began to race, trying to thinking.3.他鼓起勇气.He plucked up his courage to do .4.(副词)立刻/马上; 突然 = immediately/ abruptly/instantly/promptly; suddenly=all of a sudden 5.（短语）立刻马上；= without delay/ without pausing; 6.毫不犹豫/迟疑 = without

6、any hesitation第三部分 历险后的心情动作描写1. They breathed a sigh of relief. 2. (心有余悸) Though Mac was safe, he still could feel his heart beating quickly. He was even having troubling breathing, and he felt dizzy (眩晕). For a moment（有一会）, he was afraid he would faint (晕倒) 注：对 “adventurous experience” 总结性的句子1. Nev

7、er would they forget such a thrilling summer holiday in their whole life. 2. What a thrilling adventure!3. Many years have passed, till now, I still remember the thrilling trip to the Wild West.4. The vacation with my my forgetful mother would always stand out in my memory. 和妈妈一起的旅行总是会让我记忆犹新。话题拓展2心理

8、状态描写常用升级策略开心（通过心理、表情、动作来表达）普通版：He was happy.进阶版:1. Her eyes shone/glittered/sparkled /twinkled with joy.2. Her face lit up with pleasure.（容光焕发）3. Her heart was pounding with excitement. （砰砰直跳）4. Happiness/joy/pleasure/delight took hold of him.(极度开心)5. She was overflowing with happiness/joy/pleasure/

9、delight.(幸福洋溢)6. He shed tears of joy.（流下开心的泪水）例句：1. His eyes twinkled with pleasure when he saw the news.当他看到新闻，他的眼里闪耀着快乐。2. He grinned with delight when he saw us.当他看到我们，咧开嘴开心地笑了。3. The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪耀。4. I couldnt restrain my joy and jumped into the house.我抑制不

10、住内心的喜悦，蹦蹦跳跳地进了家门。5. He cast us a look/glance,with his face wearing a broad/wide/radiant/warm smile.她看向我们，面带灿烂/温暖的笑容。6. When his mother kissed him on the cheek,it seemed as if the baby were on the top of the world.当妈妈亲吻他的脸颊时，小婴儿开心极了。伤心（心理、表情、动作）普通版：He was sad.进阶表达：不同的哭：cry 哭（泛指，哭出声） sob 呜咽，啜泣 wail 嚎啕

11、大哭 weep 小声/无声流泪burst into tears 放声大哭 fight back tears 抑制住泪水be close to tears / be on the verge of tears 快要哭了 be in tears 含泪 例句：1. He sighed with disappointment.他失望地叹了口气。2. He struggled to fight back his tears.他试图控制住自己的泪水。3. His eyes brimmed with tears of sorrow.他的眼里噙满了悲伤的泪水。4. He stood silently, tea

12、rs rolling down his cheeks.他静静地站着，眼泪流下他的脸颊。5. I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness. 我感觉自己漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。6. I saw an old lady wailing with fist beating her chest in the street corner. 我看到一个老奶奶在街角捶胸痛哭。7. When he embraced me with his arms open wide, I felt my throat choke with sob. 当他张开双臂拥抱我时，我觉

13、得自己喉头哽咽。8. Upon hearing the bad news, she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldnt help crying bitterly. 一听到这个坏消息，她就被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣。紧张（心理、表情、动作）普通版：He was nervous.进阶版：1. Standing in the classroom, I became increasingly nervous and could feel my heart beating wildly. 站在教室里，我越来越紧张，我能听见自己心跳加速的声音。2

14、. Her face turned pale, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.她的脸刷白，感觉如坐针毡。3. Before the competition, his palms were sweaty and knees were soft.比赛前，他手心出汗，膝盖发软。4. At the sight of the fierce wolf, I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak. 看到恶狼，我喉咙发紧，膝盖发软。5. At the sight of t

15、he fierce wolf, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch. 看到恶狼，我被吓呆到一动不动。6. At the sight of the fierce wolf, I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating. 看到恶狼，我被一股强烈的恐惧感攫住了，掌心流汗。尴尬/羞愧（心理、表情、动作）普通版： He was embarrassed/ashamed.进阶版：1. His face flushed(通红)/burned(燃烧)with e

16、mbarrassment/shame. 他因尴尬而满脸通红。/他窘得脸都红了。2. He hung/dropped/lowered his head in shame. 他羞愧地低下了头。3. She felt so ashamed that she could feel her face burning. 她感到羞愧难当，脸上滚烫。4. So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face. 她感到羞愧极了，血液涌上脸颊。5. So ashamed did she feel that she was close t

17、o tears. 她羞愧到快哭了。愤怒（心理、表情、动作）普通版： He was angry.进阶表达：fly off the handle 勃然大怒 lose ones temper发脾气例句：1. His voice trembled with anger/rage(愤怒). 他气得声音发抖。2. He glared at me with burning eyes. 他盯着我，眼里充满怒火。3. Filled with anger/fury(狂怒)，Tom was unable to utter a single word.Tom气得一句话也说不出。4. Boiling with rage

18、，Tom shook his fist at me. Tom怒火中烧，对我挥舞拳头。绝望（心理、表情、动作）普通版：He felt hopeless/desperate.进阶版：1. Upon hearing the bad news, he was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and sank into hopelessness. 听到这个坏消息，他突然被投入黑暗世界，陷入绝望。2. He felt left out and was getting desperate with loneliness. 他感觉被遗弃了，孤独使他感到绝望。3

19、. His beliefs in looking forward and seeing the positive in everything deserted him.（被信念抛弃） 他那种向前看、看到一切事物积极一面的信念抛弃了他。感谢（心理、表情、动作）普通版：I thanked my father.进阶版：1. I ran over to my father, reached out my hands and hugged/embraced him tightly/firmly.我跑向父亲，伸出手，紧紧抱住他。2. With grateful tears hanging in his e

20、yes, he kept extending（表达）his gratitude(感激）， “Thank you so much!”他眼中满是感激的泪水，不停地说：“非常感谢！”鼓励（心理、表情、动作）普通版： He felt encouraged.进阶版：1. Taking a deep breath, I managed to calm myself down and walked up to the platform confidently.深吸一口气，我成功地让自己镇定，然后自信地走上了讲台。2. I walked over to him, and patted him on the s

21、houlder, encouraging: “Come on!” 我走向他，拍拍他的肩膀，鼓励道：“加油！”震惊（心理、表情、动作）普通版： He was surprised/shocked.进阶版： 1. His eyes grew wide/widened with surprise/astonishment(震惊)when he heard the news.听到这个消息后，他惊讶地睁大了眼睛。2. Its hard to believe. He didnt accept the job that he was long for. 真难以置信，他竟然没有接受那份期待已久的工作。3. Gr

22、andfathers death was really a bolt from the blue for me.祖父去世的消息对我来说简直是晴天霹雳。疑惑/迷茫（心理、表情、动作）普通版： He felt confused.进阶版： 1. With a confused look on his face, he had no idea what to do. 他露出困惑的表情，不知道该做什么。2. He scratched his head, having on idea what to do.他挠了挠头，不知道该做什么。3. He scratched his head, not unders

23、tanding a word.他挠了挠头，一个字也听不懂。实践强化31阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。One of my most memorable trips took place during the summer vacation about three years ago, when my sister, my aunt and I took a trip to Spain because we were moving. On the day of the trip, I lay in bed thinking about my friend

24、s whom I was going to leave behind and thoughts were flooding in.When we arrived at the hire station, we seemed to have some problems with our luggage because it was too much for a taxi, so we had to book a van (厢式送货车) to take our luggage to the airport. We waited for a long period to find a perfect

25、 van that would fit our luggage.Before leaving, I felt very bad because I was going to a different country and was going to miss all my friends and family. I was not comfortable and cried.The journey was almost perfect at the beginning, but soon it began to rain. Because of the rain, the drivers cou

26、ld not see far away, which caused a huge traffic jam. I was sitting by the window with a can of Coke that I had bought in the store earlier. My aunt and sister fell asleep, and during this time. I felt bored and thought about other things that bothered me. My eyes turned to the mountain in front of

27、us.A bus suddenly appeared in the picture. It was very close to us. Cars sped past us without any speed limit. Beside me was a very deep lake: I wondered to myself what if something or someone fell inside it. Suddenly, a bus in front of our van stopped, and because it was raining heavily and the van

28、 was going fast, no one could see what was going to happen. Then, bang, we bumped into each other. Our van overturned, but luckily, it didnt fall into the lake. People came to help us get out of the van because we were blocked and the driver was half-dead.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。We s

29、truggled to get out of the van and everything we had was gone._I was losing a lot of blood and then the emergency aid came._【参考范文】We struggled to get out of the van and everything we had was gone. Everything was very strange. I had never had that kind of experience before. It was like watching a hor

30、ror movie. Some people who were also in the accident started crying, looking for their children, tears beginning to increase. My leg was badly injured. My aunt was calling to seek some help, and my sister was full of injury. It almost seemed that the tragedy was never going to end. I was losing a lo

31、t of blood and then the emergency aid came. They took us to hospital where we were treated. We had to pay for some fees, but we had no money. The doctors and nurses who were present learned of our condition and paid for us. Although we had experienced a bad accident, we were all lucky to have receiv

32、ed help from those warm-hearted people. After that we went on with our journey and reached our destination successfully at last.【写作指导】本文以人物为线索开展故事，作者讲述了三年前去西班牙度暑假时，在去飞机场的路上，遭遇车祸的故事。1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我们挣扎着从厢式送货车里爬出来，发现我们的一切东西都不见了。”可知，第一段可描写作者目睹遭遇车祸后的惨状。由第二段首句内容“我正在流血，救护车来了。”可知，第二段可描写医生和护士抢救我们的经过。2.续写线索

33、：爬出运货车目睹惨状绝望救护车到达医院救助医护人员筹钱感动3.词汇激活行为类寻找：look for/search for结束：go to end/come to a stop照顾：treat/take care of情绪类哭泣：start crying/burst out crying糟糕的：bad/terrible【典型句式】句式1. Some people who were also in the accident started crying, looking for their children, tears beginning to increase.(运用了who引导的定语从句以及

34、现在分词作状语和独立主格结构）句式2. They took us to hospital where we were treated. (运用了where引导的定语从句）2阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。In July 2019, to celebrate his 45th birthday, Colin Dowler booked off a week from his job as a maintenance manager for the Vancouver Island Health Authority. He planned to spend

35、 two days on his own, finding a route he would eventually use to climb Mount Doggie Dowler.His wife Jenifer didnt like the sound of her husbands latest plan. She was used to Dowler going on adventures by himself, but this time hed boat to an unknown bay, bike an unpopulated road , hike through grizz

36、ly bear country, and camp overnights alone. There was too much room for disaster.The night before his journey Colin packed the necessities. He filled the remaining pockets of his bag with a handheld GPS, hiking poles, his homemade sausage, and a few other essentials. Instead of his usual Swiss Army

37、knife, he took a three-inch stainless steel pocket knife given to him by his dad.The weather that Sunday, July 28 was nice. Colin pulled his car into the Campbell River port and quickly launched and set off in his motorboat with a mountain bike on board. About eight oclock in the morning, he arrived

38、 at Ramsay Arm, and found a spot to tie the boat near a logging （伐木）camp where he chatted with some logging workers.One of the workers , Vito, gave him a ride in his truck until the forest got too thick. Colin took off his bike and backpack from the truck and started his hiking and route searching.

39、In order not to lose the way back, he marked his trail with blue ribbons （布条）.As he made his seven-kilometer marker, he came around a bend and suddenly put on the brakesa dirty grizzly bear stood right in the middle of the narrow road, 30 meters away. Colin calculated his chances of turning around f

40、or a quick escape, but the bear could easily catch up and stop him before he picked up speed.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。The bear suddenly stood up in a threatening way._After what seemed like hours, Colin came to himself._【参考范文】Paragraph 1:The bear suddenly stood up in a threatening way. Meanwhile, Colin threw the sausages in his backpack towards the bear, hoping the flavor would attract it. Unfortunately, the bear rushed to him. Colin was pushed to the ground and bit in the left leg. “Ah!” he screamed with the unbearable pain. Blood flowing out, Colin