2024年高考英语全国I卷作文讲评课件-2025届高三上学期英语一轮复习专项.pptx

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1、2024届高考英语P PI ICTURECTURE ALBUMALBUMTHETHE G GREENREEN 作 文 讲 评全国I卷2 0 2 3高考应假定你是李华，你们班上周五在公园上了一节美术课，请给英国好友Chris写一封邮件分享你的经历，内容包括：1.你的作品内容；2.你的感想。DearChris,IamwritingtosharewithyoutheartclassIhadintheparklastFriday._Yours,LiHua时间，地点，事件（前中后），感受，评价分享经历：活动报道分享经历：活动报道2 0 2 3高考应DearChris,Iamwritingtosharew

2、ithyoutheartclassIhadintheparklastFriday.时间，地点都已给出，该写画画的过程了，began,then,.1.你的作品内容；2.你的感想。Ibeganbydrawing.andthenadded.完成要求完成要求1：你的作品内容；：你的作品内容；2 0 2 3高考应DearChris,IamwritingtosharewithyoutheartclassIhadintheparklastFriday.Ibeganbydrawingthestraighttrunkofastrongpinetree,andthenaddedbundlesofevergreen

3、needles,有点干，加点非谓语修饰一下。1.你的作品内容：松树，枝干，针叶你的作品内容：松树，枝干，针叶Soakinguptheatmosphereinthenaturalscenes,Ibeganbydrawingthestraighttrunkofastrongpinetree,andthenaddedbundlesofevergreenneedles,makingthemliftedgentlytowardsthesun.画的这么好，老师肯定要夸奖和点评2 0 2 3高考应DearChris,IamwritingtosharewithyoutheartclassIhadinthepa

4、rklastFriday.Soakinguptheatmosphereinthenaturalscenes,Ibeganbydrawingthestraighttrunkofastrongpinetree,andthenaddedbundlesofevergreenneedles,makingthemliftedgentlytowardsthesun.Soakinguptheatmosphereinthenaturalscenes,Ibeganbydrawingthestraighttrunkofastrongpinetree,andthenaddedbundlesofevergreennee

5、dles,makingthemliftedgentlytowardsthesun.Muchtomydelight,myartteacherthoughthighlyofmyworkandemphasizedmypaintingwassetapartfromotherspaintingsbydemonstratingthestrengthandgoodtoleranceofpinetrees.Ididharvestalot.2.你的感想。1.你的作品内容：松树，枝干，针叶，老师的夸奖和评价你的作品内容：松树，枝干，针叶，老师的夸奖和评价先总后分先总后分总：总：unforgettable分：分：n

6、ot only.but also.2 0 2 3高考应DearChris,IamwritingtosharewithyoutheartclassIhadintheparklastFriday.Soakinguptheatmosphereinthenaturalscenes,Ibeganbydrawingthestraighttrunkofastrongpinetree,andthenaddedbundlesofevergreenneedles,makingthemliftedgentlytowardsthesun.Soakinguptheatmosphereinthenaturalscenes

7、,Ibeganbydrawingthestraighttrunkofastrongpinetree,andthenaddedbundlesofevergreenneedles,makingthemliftedgentlytowardsthesun.Muchtomydelight,myartteacherthoughthighlyofmyworkandemphasizedmypaintingwassetapartfromotherspaintingsbydemonstratingthestrengthandgoodtoleranceofpinetrees.Ididharvestalot.Itwa

8、ssuchanunforgettablelessonbecausenotonlydidI.,butitalso.既要回归到美术课，又要点明大自然既要回归到美术课，又要点明大自然ItwassuchanunforgettablelessonbecausenotonlydidI acquiresome practicaldrawing techniques,but it also raised my awareness ofprotectingtheenvironment.2 0 2 3高考读 后 续 写ImetGunteronacold,wetandunforgettableeveninginSe

9、ptember.IhadplannedtoflytoViennaandtakeabustoPragueforaconference.Duetoabigstorm,myflighthadbeendelayedbyanhourandahalf.ItoucheddowninVienna just 30minutes beforethe departure of the last bus to Prague.ThemomentIgotofftheplane,Iranlikecrazythroughtheairportbuildingandjumpedintothefirsttaxiontherankw

10、ithoutasecondthought.ThatwaswhenImetGunter.ItoldhimwhereIwasgoing,buthesaidhehadntheardofthebusstation.Ithoughtmypronunciationwastheproblem,soIexplainedagainmoreslowly,buthestilllookedconfused.WhenIwasabouttogiveup,Gunterfishedouthislittlephoneandrangupafriend.Afteraheateddiscussionthatlastedforwhat

11、seemedlikeacentury,Gunterputhisphonedownandstartedthecar.环境描写，后面要呼应时间紧迫，很着急Gunter乐于帮忙，我很着急problem 1：赶时间去：赶时间去Prague开会开会2 0 2 3高考读 后 续 写Finally,withjusttwominutestosparewerolledintothebusstation.Thankfully,therewasalongqueuestillwaitingtoboardthebus.Gunterparkedthetaxibehindthebus,turnedaround,andloo

12、kedatmewithabigsmileonhisface.Wemadeit,hesaid.JustthenIrealizedthatIhadzerocashinmywallet.IflashedhimanapologeticsmileasIpulledoutmyPortuguesebankcard.Hetrieditseveraltimes,butthecardmachinejustdidnotplayalong.AfeelingofhelplessnesswashedovermeasIsawthebusqueuethinningout.Atthismoment,Gunterpointedt

13、owardsthewaitinghallofthebusstation.Thereattheentrance,wasacashmachine.Ijumpedoutofthecar,madeamadrunforthemachine,andpoppedmycardin,onlytoreadthemessage:“Outoforder.Sorry.”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews._Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspr

14、omised._Gunter友善，问题似乎要被解决problem 1还没解决，还没解决，problem 2：没现金交车费，这倒霉的一天：没现金交车费，这倒霉的一天Gunter：friendly，helpfulproblems：快赶不上公交车了，我没现金交车费三 个 问 题：1.Who?2.Whatproblem?3.Whoandhowtosolvetheproblem?1.Who are they?I,inahurry,madrun,nocash,apologeticsmileGunter,friendly，helpful2 0 2 3高考2.W h a t i s t h e problem

15、?I:inahurrytocatchthelastbustoPraguenocashtopayfortheride3.Who and how to solve the problem?成功赶上公交车，我跟Gunter承诺，给他打了电话，由此推测，解决的办法是：段首句：IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.Gunter当时没要车费，让我去赶车当时没要车费，让我去赶车IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.层次1

16、：层次2：层次3：Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.主要情节：Gunter当时没要车费，我问他要电话号码，承诺四天后付清车费，我及时赶上了车，四天后，我还了车费，表达感谢。2 0 2 3高考Gunter的反应，说了什么，我的反应。我要他电话号码，作出承诺。我成功的赶上了公交车，完成了会议，取了现金。Gunter想了一下，看到排队的人越来越少，他说先去赶车，后面再还钱。我既惊讶又感激。我立刻找他要电话号码，并承诺四天后给他打电话，付清车费。我立刻跑向公交车，最后一分钟上了车，成功参加会议，回去之前，我取了一些现金

17、。Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.层次1：层次2：层次3：主要情节：四天后，我还了车费，表达感谢。还钱，表达感谢Gunter做了什么，说了什么2 0 2 3高考寒冷的九月，我的心里很温暖。升华主题：善良熟悉的车，熟悉的脸庞，我从包里拿出钱给他，说感谢你的信任和帮助。Gunter接过钱，说不客气，然后开走了。2 0 2 3高考情 节 梳 理IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Gunter想了一下，看到排队的人越来越少，他说先去赶车，后面再还钱。我既惊讶又感激，立刻找他要电话

18、号码，并承诺四天后给他打电话，付清车费。他点了点头，我立刻跑向公交车，最后一分钟上了车，成功参加会议，回去之前，我取了一些现金。Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.熟悉的车，熟悉的脸庞，我从包里拿出钱给他，说感谢你的信任和帮助。Gunter接过钱，说不客气，然后开走了。寒冷的九月，我的心里很温暖。升华主题：善良2 0 2 3高考参 考 范 文IranbacktoGunterandtoldhimthebadnews.Hepausedforamomentashefoundthebusqueuealmostthinne

19、dout.“Justgoandcatchthebus.Youcanpaythefarelater.”hesaid,withthesamebigsmileonhisface.Shockedandgrateful,Iaskedforhisphonenumberatonceandpromisedtopayfortheridefourdayslater.Seeinghimnodhishead,Iturnedaroundwithouthesitation,madeamadrunforthelastbustoPragueandjumpedontoitwithinthelastminute.Afeeling

20、ofreliefwashedoverme.Fortunately,Imadeittotheconference,whichturnedouttobeagreatsuccess.Rememberingtheunpaidtaxifare,IwithdrewsomecashbeforereturningtoVienna.Fourdayslater,whenIwasbackinVienna,IcalledGunteraspromised.HardlyhadIspottedthefamiliarcarwhenIblockedit.Asbefore,Gunterssmilingfacecameintosi

21、ght.IflashedhimangratefulsmileasIpulledoutsomecashoutofmywallet.“Itwasyouthattrustedmeandhelpedmeout.Icantthankyouenough.”Isaid.Hetookthecash,repliedgently“Noproblem.Youdeserveit.Haveanicetrip.”andthendroveaway.Itwasanother wet and cold evening in September，but a great wave of warmth filled me.Occasionally,wemaysinkintoagrayworld,butkindnesscanbrightenitlikearayoflight.