专题06如何描写十种情绪 - 2024年新高考英语读后续写专项提高培优docx.docx

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1、查莉老师英语专题06 如何描写十种情绪在高考英语读后续写中，情绪描写可以推动情节的发展，或者说情节发展到一定程度主人公会呈现出不同的情绪。情绪描写在展现人物性格，故事发展，价值引领等方面都有重要作用。丰富的人物情感状态描写往往能够直抵主人公的心灵，揭示人物的内心世界，表现人物丰富而复杂的思想感情，反衬文章的主题，对情节的发展起到推动的作用。人物的情感有很多，如高兴、愤怒、悲伤、尴尬、焦虑、恐惧、激动、后悔等；人物状态也有很多，如生病、疲惫、口渴等。情感的表达方式多样，可以通过面部表情、语言声调和身体姿态等方式向他人表达自己的情感特征和情绪变化。如果你要写快乐，你就不能只写快乐。你要写阳光和清风

2、，写天真烂漫的笑容，写草原里悠闲的牛羊，写青山与绿水，写夜晚淅淅沥沥的小雨，写屋里相拥看一场美好的电影，写一起散步嬉笑，写清澈的眼神，写一切你向往的画面。一、尴尬羞愧【单一陈述】He is embarrassed.【具体动作】He was so embarrassed that he even didnt know where to rest his arms.他很尴尬，以至于都不知道该把手放在哪里了。【用结果状语从句，具象化尴尬体现出的动作】He cupped his face with her hands and closed his eyes. 他用手捂着脸，闭上了眼睛。He breat

3、hed and breathed until he felt calmer.他深深呼吸着，直到自己平静下来。He lowered his eyes and clenched his lips, trying to avoid our eyes. 他眼睛低垂，紧紧抿着嘴唇，尽力躲避我们的目光。【把情感描写，通过肢体动作的刻画描写出来，让文章有了色彩和内容】【添加副词】Abruptly, He cupped his face with her hands and closed his eyes. He breathed and breathed until he felt calmer. 【“ab

4、ruptly 突然地”，突显出尴尬感随即涌上心头，恰到好处的把后面所有的动作都进行了一定刻画的延展】He lowered his eyes and clenched his lips tightly, trying to avoid our eyes. 【“tightly 紧紧地”，则专门刻画了嘴巴紧闭这个动作】词汇+短语【词汇】shame 羞愧 guilt 内疚embarrassment尴尬ashamed 感到羞愧的embarrassed尴尬的shamefaced 羞愧的guilty 内疚的embarrassing 令人尴尬;难堪的shameful 可耻的(行为) awkward使人尴尬的【

5、短语】in/with embarrassment尴尬地be struck dead with shame尴尬得要死hide ones embarrassment掩饰某人的尴尬blush with embarrassment难为情得脸红be increasingly embarrassed about.感到越来越尴尬feel blood rush/rushing to ones face感到脸阵阵发烫ones face flush/bum/blush with embarrassment/shame因尴尬而满脸通红droop /duck /lower ones head with embarra

6、ssment/shame尴尬/羞愧地低下了头a deep sense of shame深感羞愧佳句欣赏【直接表达】A surge/ripple/wave/flood of embarrassment/shame rushed through/washed over/overwhelmed/crept upon sb.Guilt/shame/embarrassment was written all over ones face.Be seized/consumed/enveloped/engulfed with/by shame/embarrassment.1. He came to my o

7、ffice,shamefaced, to apologize.他一脸愧色,到我办公室来道歉。2. So ashamed did she feel that she was close to tears/ she was on the verge of tears.她羞愧到快哭了。3.Standing in the classroom. I became increasingly embarrassed and could feel my heartthumping wildly, my face burning badly.站在教室，我越来越尴尬，能听见自己心跳加速的声音，脸烧得厉害。【肢体动

8、作】Droop down/duck down/ hang down ones headCup ones face in the handsOnes lips clamped tightly togetherSb scratched ones head, hoping to find a hole to hide herself.1.She put her hands to her cheeks in embarrassment.她尴尬地把手放在脸颊上。2. He hung/dropped/lowered his head in shame.他羞愧地低下了头。3.She lowered her

9、body, wondering how to hide her inner embarrassment.她低下身子，不知道如何掩饰内心的尴尬。【神态表情】Face burned/flushed/blushed with shame.Feel blood rushed to ones faceAvoid/avert ones eyes/gazeFace reddened/turned red with shame/embarrassment1. My throat was dry and my face was burning up.我喉咙很干，脸也发烫。2.“Please dont tell

10、me dad about this he said,blushing with shame.“这件事请不要告诉我爸爸”，他不好意思地红着脸说道。3. He bit his lips, not knowing where to rest his hands.他咬着嘴唇，不知道把手放在哪里。【句式修辞】All the air seemed to disappear and she felt as if the whole world were watching her.So ashamed was I that I desperately wanted to turn invisible and

11、sneak out of the room.How I wished to find a hole to hide away.Sb was consumed with shame, twisting and rubbing his hands (扭动揉搓他的手) over and over again as if to get warm in this freezing December.1.Exposed to the truth, so firmly did embarrassment take hold of him that his palms were sweating and hi

12、s knees got weak.暴露在真相面前，他是如此地尴尬以至于手心出汗，膝盖发软。2.So embarrassed was she that she stood there clumsily, feeling the blood rush to her face.(倒装)她很尴尬，笨拙地站在那里，感到血涌到脸上。二、惊讶震惊【(肢体)动作/语言描写情感词汇】Hearing the unexpected news, Mary froze with shock, as if rooted to the spot.听到这个意外的消息,玛丽呆住了,动弹不得。I still remember t

13、he shock that rooted me flat against the wall.我仍然记得当时惊呆了，靠在墙上，一动不动。The car was gone in seconds, leaving Alice shaking her head in disbelief.几秒钟后汽车开走了,爱丽丝难以置信地摇头。【(面部)动作描写+情感词汇】A spark of flashed across his face. He froze/was stunned there, staring at me with wide eyes.他脸上闪过一丝惊奇。他惊得瞪大眼睛看着我。The moment

14、 I opened the box, my eyes grew wide/widened in great surprise/astonishment.我一打开盒子,就惊奇地睁大了眼睛。We froze, our mouths dropping/hanging open in surprise.我们呆住了,惊奇地张大了嘴。My jaw dropped/fell in astonishment when I saw the size of the audience.看到观众如此之多,我惊讶得张口结舌。Tom fainted away on the spot and fell into uncon

15、sciousness.汤姆当场晕倒，失去了知觉。I stared at him in shock and a faint sound of surprise escaped my throat.我惊愕地盯着他，不禁发出轻轻的惊愕声。When Mary heard the bad news, her eyes widened further and her mouth opened.当玛丽听到这个坏消息时，她的眼睛睁得更大，嘴也张着。My brothers sudden visit home was a complete surprise. We all stared wide-eyed at

16、him.我哥哥突然回家探望，完全出乎我们的意料。我们惊奇地睁大眼睛看着他。【心理活动描写情感词汇】Astonished, I realized that the boys had also recognized what her action meant.我惊讶地发现,孩子们也明白她的举动意味着什么。It amazed me that no one had thought of the idea sooner.居然没有人早点想到这个办法,这令我吃惊。My fathers reaction astonished me. How could he be so calm!父亲的反应让我很惊讶，他怎么

17、会如此镇静！词汇+短语【词汇】常见名词/动词 shock, astonishment, astonish, surprise, amazement, amaze常见形副词: astonished, amazed, surprised, shocked, stunned，startled，astonishing, amazing, surprising, shocking, surprisingly, amazingly其他形容词：thunderstruck 极其惊讶的, astounding 令人惊骇的, staggering令人大吃一惊的, speechless（因惊愕)一时语塞的, inc

18、redible 难以置信的, dumbfounded 目瞪口呆的【短语】to ones shock/astonishment/surprise/amazement 令某人震惊/吃惊/惊异的是in astonishment/surprise/shock/amazement/disbelief 吃惊地/震惊地/惊异地be surprised/amazed/astonished/shocked at/by.对感到惊讶it amazes/astonishes me that.令我惊讶的是What amazes/astonishes me most is.最让我吃惊的是come as a shock t

19、o sb. 让某人很震惊gasp in astonishment 吃惊地倒吸一口冷气beyond ones expectations出乎意料raise the eyebrows/frown in surprise惊讶的皱眉widen the eyes/eyes grew wide in great surprise/astonishment吃惊地睁大了眼睛freeze/stand still/stop dead/be numb with shock惊得当场呆住了be shocked beyond words惊讶地说不出话来speechless with shock惊得说不出话来jaw almo

20、st dropped/fell in astonishment惊掉了下巴a spark of surprise flashed/passed across ones eyes眼中闪过一丝震惊（眼）be seized by shock震惊throw sb. into astonishment 使某人震惊佳句欣赏 【直接表达】Surprised/amazed/astonished/astounded/stunned/shocked(震惊的)/startled/alarmed(惊吓的)Thunderstruck/dumbfounded/staggered/ speechless(大吃一惊）Sb wa

21、s thrown into a state of astonishment/shock/amazementIt came as a surprise/shock to sb that.Much/Greatly to ones shock/astonishment.Beyond ones expectationSb be shocked/astonished beyond words1. I sensed a flash of surprise in his eyes.我感到他眼里有一丝惊讶。2. On learning the truth, I was totally shocked.得知真相

22、后，我完全震惊了。3.We were devastated, shocked beyond belief.我们遭到了挫败，震惊得难以置信。4.He was thrown into astonishment.他大吃一惊。5.Fans looked on in amazement as Robbins missed a third goal for the team.球迷看着Robbins第三次错失进球机会,惊愕不已。6.Frozen with shock, we approached and found the driver of the car was a six-year-old boy.

23、我们靠近，发现车主是一个六岁男孩，都惊呆了。7.Speechless with shock, we approached and found the driver of the car was a six-year-old boy.我们靠近，发现车主是一个六岁男孩，目瞪口呆。【肢体动作】Be rooted/glued to the spot, speechlessSb glued ones eyes to sth, utterly dumbfounded/ ones eyes kept glued to somethingSb froze/be numb/stand still/ stop d

24、ead with shock/astonishment惊呆了Sb stood unblinking, trying to process what he had just been toldStiffen with shock僵住了1. The car was gone in seconds, leaving Alice shaking her head in disbelief.汽车在几秒钟内就开走了，爱丽丝难以置信地摇摇头。2.Hearing the bad news，Mary froze with shock, as if rooted on the ground.听到这个坏消息，玛丽吓

25、得僵住了，像扎根在地上一样。3.The little boy was speechless with shock.小男孩惊得说不出话。4.He was too surprised to speak or even to think.他惊讶得说不出话来，甚至脑子都不灵了5.The moment I opened the box, my eyes grew wide in great surprise/astonishment.我一打开盒子，就惊奇地睁大眼睛。6.Everyone gasped in astonishment as the cars came around the last ben

26、d.汽车转过最后一个弯道时,人人都惊得倒吸了一口气。7.Hearing the unexpected news, Mary was numb with shock, as if rooted to the ground.听到这个意外的消息，Mary呆住了，动弹不得。【神态表情】Sb stood with his mouth wide open/ agapeOnes eyes grew wide in astonishmentWide-eyed/ ones eyes widened in alarmjaw almost dropped/fell in astonishment(惊掉了下巴)gas

27、p in astonishment 吃惊地倒吸一口冷气1.When I looked at the grade on my math paper my jaw dropped to the ground.看到数学卷子成绩的那一刻，我惊得下巴掉在地上。2.She stared at him in wide-eyed amazement.她睁大眼睛惊讶地注视着他。3.A look of surprise spread over her face.惊愕的表情在她的脸上蔓延开来。4.My jaw dropped in astonishment when I saw the size of the au

28、dience.当我看到这么多观众时，我惊讶得目瞪口呆。5.Our mouths dropped open in surprise.我们惊讶地张大了嘴。6.He just glued his eyes to me, utterly dumbfounded.他只是两眼盯着我，完全傻掉了。【句式修辞】Sb froze like a piece of wood/ a statueSb sat motionlessly there and stared straight ahead, barely blinking, like a statue.Despite her best efforts to r

29、emain unaffected, her raised eyebrows betrayed her astonishment. I stared at him in shock and a faint sound of surprise escaped my throat.1.It gave me a shock when I realized that my children prepared gifts for me.当我意识到孩子们为我准备礼物，我大吃一惊。2.With our jaws dropping to the ground, We approached and found t

30、he driver of the car was a six-year-old boy.我们靠近，发现车主是一个六岁男孩，惊掉下巴。3.When I was having my oral exam, I got so tongue-tied that it was a miracle that I could utter a complete sentence. 当进行口语考试时，我非常瞠目结舌，以至于能说出一个完整的句子就是一个奇迹。三、紧张焦虑【通过心理活动表达紧张】1. The presentation tomorrow is making me feel incredibly anxi

31、ous.2. Every step closer to the interview room heightened my nervousness.3. The phone call had me on edge (紧张不安), waiting for news that seemed forever delayed.4. He just couldnt shake off the anxious thoughts that kept racing through his mind.5. The upcoming deadline made me increasingly uneasy.【通过动

32、作神态等表现紧张】1. My hands were shaking, my palms began to sweat and I could feel my heart pounding/beating fast.2. Before she went on stage, her chest felt tight and her throat hurt.3. Constant worry kept him up at night, tossing and turning (辗转反侧).4. A subtle quiver (颤抖) in his voice revealed the nervou

33、sness he couldnt hide.5. She tapped her foot anxiously outside the room, waiting for her turn.6. His hands trembled as he attempted to mask his unease with a forced smile.7. He stood there, breathing heavily, sweat dripping from his forehead.【通过修辞或习语等使描写更生动】1. Sweating bullets, I struggled to mainta

34、in a composed (镇定的) appearance. (sweat bullets 极度焦虑不安)2. She felt a little rush of butterflies in her stomach. (butterflies in ones stomach 心慌意乱的，忐忑不安的)3. The wait for the exam results tied her stomach in knots. (tie ones stomach in knots 让某人心揪成一团)词汇+短语4. He glanced at the clock repeatedly, each sec

35、ond ticking louder in his anxious mind.【词汇】名词concern 担忧 anxiety 焦虑agitation 忧虑形容词concerned 担忧的 anxious焦虑的agitated焦虑不安的restless坐立不安的 nervous 紧张的tense紧张的动词shake 战栗，颤抖tremble/shiver/quiver 颤抖，哆嗦【短语】trembled from head to toe浑身颤抖half hesitant and half nervous半犹豫半紧张 toss and turn辗转反侧ones stomach twist胃搅成一

36、团feel ones heart begin to pound心开始砰砰的跳 have ants in ones pants像热锅上的蚂蚁 pace up and down来回踱步be on pins and needles如坐针毡got butterflies in ones stomach很紧张佳句欣赏 【直接表达】Nervous/anxious/apprehensive/panicked/terrified/horrified/frightenedPanic/anxiety terror seized/took hold of/ got the better of /gripped sb

37、A pang of fear/panic/anxiety crept on/upon sbBe thrown into a state of panicPanic-stricken/startleda hair-raising adventure/story1. Scared and nervous, she was frozen to the spot.由于感到害怕和紧张，她僵在原地。2.Half hesitant and half nervous, Mei Mei headed toward the twins table.半犹豫半紧张，MeiMei朝双胞胎的桌子走去。3.(Feeling

38、) anxious, he was pacing up and down in the corridor while his wife was being operated on in the surgery room.在妻子在手术室里动手术时，他(感到)焦虑，在走廊上来回踱步。4. She felt a knot of anxiety tighten in her stomach as she waited for the test results. (当她等待着测试结果时，她感到胃里一阵焦虑的紧绷。)5. Anxiety washed over him like a tidal wave,

39、 making it difficult to concentrate on anything else. (焦虑如潮水般涌上他心头，让他难以集中精力做其他事情。)6. Every decision she made was clouded by a sense of anxiety, fearing the consequences of each choice. (她每做出一个决定都伴随着焦虑感，担心每个选择的后果。)【肢体动作】Tremble/shiver/quiver with panic/frightBe frozen with fearBe rooted/glued to the

40、spot, too scared to move an inchOnes hair stood on endsSb bite his fingers restlessly. Ones teeth chattered uncontrollablyPace back and forthClutch the corner of clothes tightly1.He was drumming his fingers nervously on the wheel.他不安地用手指敲着方向盘。2. Anxious, Tom trembled from head to toe.太焦虑了，Tom 浑身颤抖。3

41、.A flood of tension/nervousness welled up in me. I could feel my palms sweating, heart racing/pounding/beating wildly in my chest.我紧张极了，觉得自己手心冒汗，心跳加速。4.At the thought of tomorrows ball, she tossed and turned in bed, unable to fall asleep.想到明天的舞会，她在床上辗转反侧，无法入睡。5. Walking into the headmasters office,

42、he felt his heart begin to pound.她把看一直颤抖的腿走上舞台。6. The protagonists heart raced with unease as she faced the daunting task ahead. (当主人公面对艰巨的任务时，她的心情变得不安起来。)7. The characters hands trembled with anxiety as she prepared to deliver an important speech. (当角色准备发表重要演讲时，她的手因焦虑而颤抖。)8. The constant feeling of

43、 unease gnawed at her, leaving her sleepless and restless. (持续的不安感使她烦躁不安，无法入眠。)【神态表情】Ones face turned pale and stood there tongue-tiedHer eyes flicked back and forth.A chill ran down Joshs spine.Ones heart skipped a beat.Be numb with a blank mindMouth wide open/ agape with horrorPalms sweat/ones pal

44、ms were drenched with sweatthroat tightened1. The weight of responsibility and expectations fueled his anxiety, leaving him mentally exhausted. (责任和期望的重压助长了他的焦虑，使他精神疲惫不堪。)2. The constant worry of failure haunted her every step, crippling her with anxiety. (失败的持续担忧萦绕着她的每一步，让她深受焦虑之苦。)【句式修辞】Ones blood

45、turned to iceSb shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.got butterflies in ones stomachwent as pale as a ghost felt as if his heart would jump out of his throatheart pounded like drums1. A sense of impending doom hung over him like a dark cloud, filling him with anxiety. (一种即将到来的厄运感

46、像一块乌云笼罩着他，让他充满焦虑。)2. The weight of anxiety pressed down on her chest, making it difficult to breathe. (焦虑的负担压在她的胸口，使她难以呼吸。)四、开心兴奋【形容词】happy，delighted,joyful；excited进阶表达：be wild with joyto ones delightamazed/proud and excited 【动作链】a.说：scream,exclaim,shout,yell,roar,cry,utter,tellb.做：jump to ones feet

47、（跳起来）wave ones hands in the air（在空中挥手）beaming eyes（眉开眼笑）clap ones hand（拍手，鼓掌）lift ones hand（举起手）stare at sb.（盯着某人看）drop ones jaw（惊掉下巴）jump with joy（开心地跳起来）cheered/applauded for sb（为欢呼鼓掌）gave sb. the thumbs-up（为竖大拇指）【借助俚语表达】be over the moon（在月亮之上）形容非常高兴be on cloud nine（在九霄云外）形容飘飘欲仙，很高兴be/feel on the top of the world（在世界之巅）形容很高兴【借助神态描写、身体其他部位】wear（wore,worn）a radiant/proud/shining smilesbs face glowed/flushed/lit up with delight/pride