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1、Red book Delia读后续写：句子扩写5大绝招（原卷版）目录Part 1 句子扩写5大绝招2第一招：加形容词2第二招：加介词短语2第三招：加非谓语动词3第四招：加With 复合结构3第五招：加定语从句31：University students need to read books every day.42：People go to the gym.5Part 2 素材积累：5第一组5第二组6Part 3 实战演练：9第一组：9第二组：11第三组：11第四组：11Part 4 综合演练：121 （2022江苏模拟预测）122 （2022全国重庆南开中学模拟预测）133 读后续写模拟专练

2、14不少同学在造句子的时候，有以下的苦恼：l 1.句子简单l 2.无话可说l 3.语言苍白无力l 4.无法得到阅卷老师青睐。其中“句子太简单”是一个比较普遍的问题。有的同学也不是不愿意写长句子，而是怕写错！怕有语法错误。今天我们这节课，我就用句子扩写的诀窍，手把手教大家在读后续写中写出高分句子。“句子扩写”是指在主干的基础上添枝加叶，让句子内容更丰富，句子表达更形象。今天我会教给大家五大绝招，让一个简单句子，立刻变复杂，而且保证没有语法错误！是不是很期待呢！？我们马上开始吧！为了让大家更容易看清这些方法，本节课从始至终，我会用下面的简单句来举例说明：The girl unwrapped her

3、 gift box.女孩打开了她的礼品盒。这里unwrap表示打开，相当于open。wrap是个动词：“包裹”。un是个前缀，表示“否定”。un+wrap，就表示：不包裹了，即“打开”。Part 1 句子扩写5大绝招第一招：加形容词这里的形容词，范围比较广，可以是一个形容词，也可以是：并列形容词或者形容词短语。我们来看下面三个例句：1、The innocent girl unwrapped her delicate gift box.这个天真的女孩打开了她精致的礼盒。（ 这里的innocent天真的，是个形容词，作用是修饰名词girl）2、Curious and excited, the gi

4、rl unwrapped her gift box.这个女孩好奇而兴奋，打开了她的礼品盒。（curious and excited是并列的形容词，放在句子开头，作状语，表现了小女孩打开礼品盒时候的心理状态:好奇而兴奋！）3、Full of joy, the girl unwrapped her gift box. 女孩满心喜悦，打开了她的礼品盒。（形容词短语full of joy, 放在句子开头，作状语，作用跟上一句一样，体现了小女孩的内心喜悦的状态。）第二招：加介词短语先看下面两个例句：1. Without any hesitation, the girl unwrapped her gif

5、t box.那女孩毫不犹豫地打开了她的礼品盒。2. In surprise, the girl unwrapped her gift box. 那女孩惊讶地打开了她的礼盒。这两个句子中两个介词短语Without any hesitation毫不犹豫和in surprise惊讶地，也是为动作unwrap服务的，句首做状语，体现了打开礼品盒时候伴随着的心理状态。第三招：加非谓语动词这种结构，在句子开头出现doing sth, 我们在前面的课程中，也提到过。请看下面的例句：Screaming with excitement, the girl unwrapped her gift box.那女孩兴奋

6、地尖叫着，打开了她的礼品盒。Screaming with excitement（兴奋地尖叫）在句首做状语。需要注意的是，这种非谓语动词结构也可以放在句中，句尾，如果放在句中，需要一前一后出现两个逗号。请看下面两句：The girl, screaming with excitement, unwrapped her gift box. (放在句中，有两个逗号)The girl unwrapped her gift box, screaming with excitement. (放在句尾)我们再来看下面一个句子：Held by her mom, the girl unwrapped her gi

7、ft box. 女孩被她妈妈抱着，打开了她的礼品盒。这里没有用doing,而是用了done, 即held，为什么呢？因为hold“抱着”这个动作和女孩the girl之间形成了被动关系，所以就用 done的形式。第四招：加With 复合结构with的复合结构，前面有节课详细讲解了，在这里我就不在重复讲太多了。不太熟悉这个结构的同学，可以再去复习一下哦！请看两个例句： With her mouth wide open, the girl unwrapped her gift box.那女孩张大了嘴巴，打开了她的礼盒。 With her heart beating wildly, the girl

8、 unwrapped her gift box. 女孩心怦跳动，打开她的礼盒。在这里，需要引申一个知识点，就是with的复合结构，也可放在一个名词的后面充当定语，请看例句：The girl withlongblackhair unwrapped her delicate gift box.那个黑色长发的女孩打开了她那精致的礼品盒。在主语girl后添加withlongblackhair作定语，能更形象地描写thegirl的特征。第五招：加定语从句定语从句放在名词的后面，为名词添加了更多的修饰信息。比如： The girl unwrapped her gift box which she had

9、been looking forward to.女孩打开了她一直期待的礼品盒。 The girl unwrapped her gift box which was tied with red ribbon.那女孩打开了她用红丝带系好的礼品盒。好，句子扩写的五招已经介绍完毕。我们一起复习一下吧！ 第一招：加形容词； 第二招：加介词短语； 第三招：加非谓语动词； 第四招：加With 复合结构； 第五招：加定语从句。我们最后来一个超级大挑战，把上面的方法融合在一起，形成一个超级长句。先回忆一下原句：The girl unwrapped her gift box.那女孩打开了她的礼盒。准备好了吗？3.

10、2,1.来看这个“句无霸”With her heart beating wildly, the innocent girl, held by her mom and screaming with excitement, unwrapped her delicate gift box which she had been looking forward to without any hesitation.这个天真的女孩的心疯狂地跳动着，被妈妈抱着，兴奋地尖叫着，打开了她一直期待着的精致的礼品盒。补充例句：1：University students need to read books every

11、 day.加上定语University students need to read booksover a wide range of subjects.加上状语University students need to read booksover a wide range of subject sin order to acquire more knowledge.加上同位语或者插入语University students need to read booksover a wide range of subjects,such as history, psychology and scienc

12、e,in order to acquire more knowledge.加上定语从句University students need to read booksover a wide range of subjects,such as history, psychology and science,in order to acquire more knowledgethat is of use to their future career.加上状语从句University students need to read books over a wide range of subjects,su

13、ch as history, psychology and science,in order to acquire more knowledgethat is of use to their future career,as long as they have free time.加上并列University studentsor young peoplewho just enter the workforceneed to read booksover a wide range of subjects,such as history, psychology and science,in or

14、der to acquire more knowledgethat is of use to their future career,as long as they have free time.2：People go to the gym.加上when时间People go to the gymwhenever they like.加上where地点People go to the gymwhenever they like,as long as it is near home.加上who什么样的人Health-consciouspeople go to the gymwhenever th

15、ey like,as long as it is near home.加上how人去做什么Health-consciouspeople go to the gymwhenever they like,as long as it is near home,and use fitness equipment there, such as treadmills and dumbbells.加上why做这件事的缘由Health-consciouspeople go to the gymwhenever they like,as long as it is near home,and use fitne

16、ss equipment there, such as treadmills and dumbbellsto build muscles and stay fit.Part 2 素材积累：英语写作拓展长句的常用词/词组第一组1. in the first place 首先2. first and foremost 首要的,3. to begin/start with 首先4. second (ly) /in the second place 其次5. furthermore/moreover/whats more/in addition/besides而且,此外6. but 但是7. howe

17、ver 然而8. on the contrary 与此相反9. in contrast/comparison 相比之下10. nonetheless 虽然如此，但是11. nevertheless 尽管如此，然而12. last but not least 最后同样重要的13. so/therefore /in conclusion 最后，综上所述14. to conclude 最后15. in a/one word 总之，一句话16. in general 大体上17. for instance, for example, such as, When it comes to. 说起18. t

18、hat is to say /to a certain extent在某种程度上，19. to some degree在一定程度上，20. to a larger degree在很大程度上21. for one reason or another因为某种原因,22. to put it in another way换言之23. directly or indirectly 直接或间接24. in other words 换句话说25. as a matter of fact 事实上26. 名词性从句/定语从句:that, who27. 时间状语从句:before, when, after, d

19、uring28. 地点状语从句:where29. 原因状语从句:because, because of that.30. 条件状语从句:if, on condition that in case that第二组1. 首先，尤其重要的，最重要的 above all2. 偶然，无意中 by accident3. 对（于）很积极 be active in4. 合计为 add up to5. 承让错误 admit ones mistake6. 接受某人的建议 take / follow ones advice7. 就提出建议 give advice on8. 建议某人做某事 advice sb. to

20、 do sth.9. 后天 the day after tomorrow10. 毕竟；终究 after all11. 违心 against ones will12. 在岁时 at the age of13. 实现目标 achieve ones aim14. 在空中；悬而未决 in the air15. 在户外，在露天里 in the open air16. 在机场 at the airport17. 火警 the fire alarm18. 满腔怒火 be filled with anger19. 因某人之言行而生气 be angry at sth.20. 生某人的气 be angry wit

21、h sb.21. 通知 make an announcement22. 相继地，按顺序地 one after another23. 相互，彼此（三者或三者以上之间） one another24. 相互（指两者之间） each other25. 没有回答 give no answer26. 为而担心 be anxious about27. 急于做某事 be anxious to do sth.28. 分开住 live apart29. 除了(还有) apart from30. 因某事向某人认错或道歉 make/offer an apology to sb for sth.31. 与某人争论某事

22、argue with sb. about sth.32. 放在一边 lay sth. aside33. 请某人指点 / 帮助 ask sb. for advice / help34. 惊讶于 be astonished at sth.35. 以前，曾经 at one time36. 注意 pay attention to37. 对抱正确的态度 take a correct attitude towards sth.38. 引起（注意，兴趣等） attract ones attention39. 仰卧仰泳 lie / swim on ones back40. 重感冒 a bad cold41.

23、两件行李 two pieces of baggage42. 保持失去平衡 keep / lose ones balance43. 在舞会上 at the ball44. 洗冷水澡 have / take a cold bath45. 阵亡 be killed in battle46. 在海滩 on the beach47. 整理床铺 make the bed48. 以开始 begin with49. 在起始，开始 at the beginning of50. 自始自终 from beginning to end51. 形成局面；产生 come into being52. 安全带 a safet

24、y belt53. 三思而后行。 Second thoughts are best.54. 尽力，尽最大的努力 do / try ones best55. 尽量利用，善用 make the best of56. 一切顺利，万事如意 all the best57. 黑体地，粗体地 in bold58. 出身于农民家庭 be born in a peasants family59. 鞠躬 make a bow60. 动动脑子 use ones brains61. 打破纪录 break the record62. 深吸一口气 take a deep breath63. 屏息；憋住气 hold one

25、s breath64. 上气不接下气 out of breath65. 刷牙 brush ones teeth66. 突然哭起来 burst into tears67. 突然一阵大笑 a burst of laughter68. 要不是 but for69. 呼救声 a call for help70. 保持镇静（别慌） keep calm71. 保持安静（别吵） keep quiet72. 保持不动（别动） keep still73. 保持沉默（别说话） keep silent74. 夏令营 a summer camp75. 去野营 go camping76. 情不自禁 cannot hel

26、p doing77. 打牌 play cards78. 照顾，保管 take care of79. 医疗护理 medical care80. 假若那样的话 in that case81. 以防万一 in case82. 下倾盆大雨 rain cats and dogs83. 赶上（或超过） catch up with84. 偶然 by chance85. 免费 free of charge86. 主管，在掌管之下 in charge87. 由负责 in the charge of88. 掌管，负责 take charge89. 高兴起来 cheer up90. 童年时 in ones chil

27、dhood91. 挑选，选择 make a choice92. 圣诞节时 at Christmas93. 去做礼拜 go to church94. 烟头 cigarette end95. 为鼓掌 give sb. a clap96. 接近 get close to97. 一块桌布 a table cloth98. 一套衣服 a suit of clothes99. 童装 childrens clothing100. 集邮 collect stamps101. 产生，发生 come about102.（偶然）遇见或发现 come across103. 走过来；长出，发芽，上升；抬头 come u

28、p104. 共同，共有 in common105. 参加比赛 compete in a contest106. 举办音乐会 give a concert107. 条件是 on condition that108. 祝贺某人 congratulate sb. on sth.109. 相反地 on the contrary110. 失控 out of control111. 与谈话；交谈 have a conversation with sb.112. 在期间过程中 in / during the course of113. 被覆盖 be covered with114. 因某事和某人发脾气 be

29、 cross with sb. at sth.115. 划掉 cross out116. 对残忍 be cruel to sb.117. 立方米 cubic meter118. 对感到好奇 be curious about sth.119. 对造成巨大损害 do great damage to120. 处境危险 in danger121. 过时 out of date122. 在不久前，前几天 the other day123. 对充耳不闻 be deaf to sth.124. 对付，应付 deal with125. 负债 in debt126. 还清债务 out of debt127. 做

30、出决定 make a decision128. 做好事 do good deeds129. 付诸行动，生效 do the deed130. 直到深夜 deep into the nightPart 3 实战演练：将下列句子翻译成英文：第一组：1.一声尖叫划破了寂静的夜空。_2.人们在害怕、生气或痛苦时会尖叫。_3.我会呆在门口哭泣而对任何人都没好处。_4.过了一会儿，他长长地抽泣了一声，但立即用闲着的那只手捂住了自己的脸。_5.她将手捂住脸哭了起来。_6.他讲一个悲伤的故事给我听，使我落入圈套。_7.这样的想法使我呜咽得更厉害。_8.她喜极而泣._9.她鼻子一酸，流下泪来。_10.那我就坐在黑

31、暗中流泪好了。_11.再也不要哭泣了，我的姑娘。_12.抱着我，假如我需要哭泣。_13.“看看你干的好事！”雪莉哭诉道。_14.紧闭的窗户外狂风呼啸。_15.新生儿痛哭一声便开始了他们的生命。_16.小孩中的一个吓得大哭起来。_ 第二组：1. They get down to burying themselves in games.(对这个无聊的讲座感到厌烦了;偷偷地) 2. We sat together. (皓月当空:吃着月饼，分享故事) 3. He cast a embarrassed/awkward smile in my direction.(被我抓到在课堂上看小说) 4. A bu

32、rst of fear seized me immediately.(所有灯都熄灭了，房间里- -片漆黑) 5. The earthquake did cause great damage to the city. (使得很多人无家可归，很多孩子没人照顾) 6. Theres no alternative but to interrupt the game.(雨越下越大/下起了倾盆大雨) 7 He sank himself down into the sofa.(努力逐渐消失) 8. I stiffened. (不明白她在说什么:脑子一篇空白) 第三组：亮点扩句法句首1. As is know

33、n to us all, / There is no doubt that / It is universally acknowledged that 句中2. should=be expected to/be supposed to will = be most likely to/be willing to can= be able to/be sure to句尾3. , which is/means/makes/ may possibly lead to/ surely contributes to, thus making me1. We should get up early.(5个

34、词) 2. I will help you.(4个词) 3. Reading can make a full man.(6个词) 第四组：1. We should focus our mind on our studies. Why? 2. It is good for us students to take exercise. Why? 3. I suggest you give them a paper-cutting of dog. 4. It is a good idea to make more Chinese friends in your daily life. 5. It takes too long for me to receive the shoes. 6. I found the package broken. 7.Im writing to you to complain about the sports shoes.