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1、Tongxiang NO.2High School bobwangNMET Specialized Revision on Writing To strive for your success in writing 第1页当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有些人选择看当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有些人选择看电影,有些人则喜欢读原著。请你以电影,有些人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Film or book,which do you prefer?”为题,按照以下关为题,按照以下关键点写一篇英语短文:键点写一篇英语短文:1.1.看电影:省时、有趣、易懂看电影:省时、有趣、易懂2.2.读原著:细节更多、语言优
2、美读原著:细节更多、语言优美3.3.我看法及理由我看法及理由注意:注意:1.1.词数词数100-120100-120,文章题目和开头已给出。,文章题目和开头已给出。2.2.参考词汇参考词汇:original work/book in the original (原著)(原著)浙江高考书面表示第2页了解得分了解得分,力争拿高分力争拿高分 平平 均均 得得 分分13.96考考生生332624分值l百分比分值l百分比分值l百分比 03.9%113.3%211.7%12%125.3%221.6%21.3%137.5%231.5%31.1%149%240.3%44%1510.2%250.2%51%169
3、.2%260.1%61.3%178.3%270.1%71.9%188.3%28 81.7%197.7%29 92.8%203.6%30 104.2%第3页抄阅读文章中句子;不知所云.得分为0分第4页语言素质欠缺语言素质欠缺;基本功差基本功差;语句毛病多语句毛病多;大大小写小写;标点符号标点符号;书写不清等等书写不清等等;得得6分分.第5页卷面不整齐卷面不整齐;涂改较多涂改较多;语言错语言错误多误多;层次层次不清不清;得得11 11分分第6页语言不地道语言不地道;汉字式思维汉字式思维;词汇错误词汇错误;卷卷面有涂改面有涂改;得得2020分分.第7页有少许语言错误有少许语言错误;得得2727分分第
4、8页 Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story.Besides,the film is usually more interesting,and it is easier to follow.Some others have just the opposite opinion.They think that they can
5、get more detailed information from the original.Meanwhile,the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.Personally,I agree with the second view.Actually I have more reasons for it.I think I can stay at home,reading quietly in a situation of my own,and whats more,I am able to better
6、understand the authors ideas.In a word,to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.?Its a sample!第9页Close your eyes and imagine how much you will score yours!Do it following me Be familiar with how to write and then take enough actions to fulfill your dream 第10页Sentence stru
7、ctures and vocabulary1.Use correct tenses and contain all the related points 2.Make the sentence structures varied and words or phrases special.3.Organize the writing well with proper discourse marks Tenses&pointsDiscourse markers Discussion:How to get higher marks?第11页 1.Susan was ill in hospital.S
8、he couldnt go to the concert.(现在分词现在分词)2.The professor entered the hall.His students followed him.(过去分词过去分词)3.He wants to improve his spoken English.He often talks with the native speakers.(不定式不定式)(一一)、非谓语动词使用、非谓语动词使用Being ill in hospital,Susan couldnt go to the concert.Followed by his students,the
9、professor entered the hall.In order to improve his spoken English,he often talks with the native speakers.Aimed at improving 巧用各种结构增强句子表现力巧用各种结构增强句子表现力第12页 4.They havent completed the program.They have to stay there for another two weeks(现在分词现在分词)(04上海)上海)5.We are faced with so much trouble,we faile
10、d to complete the task on time.(过去分词过去分词)(06四川)四川)6.If you want to find more about university course,call(920)746-3789.(不定式不定式)(05 浙江)浙江)Not having completed the program,they have to stay there for two weeksFaced with so many trouble,we failed to complete the task on time.To find out more about univ
11、ersity courses,call(920)746-3789.巧用各种结构增强句子表现力巧用各种结构增强句子表现力第13页1.He didnt realize his danger until he was left alone.Not until 2.We can save the animals by changing the plants we eat.Only 3.She is clever but she never works hard.as/though4.The clock tower stands on the other side of the streetOn the
12、 other side of the street he was left alone did he realize his danger.by changing the plants we eat can we saveClever she is,she never works hard.二、倒装句使用二、倒装句使用stands the clock tower.第14页5.I could never imagine these people are living in such poor condition in my wildest dream.(06安徽)安徽)Never 6 Then
13、I realised how much damage had been caused (06 陕西)陕西)Only 7 He may be a quiet student,he talks a lot about his favourite singers after class(05重庆)重庆).as/though8.Along with the time spent on computer,some problems arise there Never in my wildest dream could I imagine these people are living in such p
14、oor conditionthen did I realize how much damage hadQuite student he may be,he talks .,there arise some problems第15页1.He didnt realize his danger until he was left alone.2.The teachers words encouraged her greatly.三、强调句使用三、强调句使用It was not until he was left alone that he realised his danger.It was the
15、 teachers words that encouraged her greatly.It is the Super Girl Competition that makes girls gain confidence.3 The Super Girl Competition makes girls gain confidence第16页1.To our surprise,he refused to take the position.名词性名词性2.I wont believe what he says.状语状语What surprised us was that he refused to
16、 take No matter what you say,I wont believe.四、从句使用四、从句使用3.When he climbed up higher,he felt more breathless.比比较)较)The higher he climbed up,the more breathless he felt.4.We all know that China will host the Olympic Games.定语定语As is known to all,China will host the Olympic Games.第17页1.The manager had m
17、any problems to solve.He looked worried.(with)2.When he arrived home,he found his house freshly painted.With many problems to solve,the manager looked worried.五、介词短语使用五、介词短语使用On his arrival home,he found his house freshly painted.第18页使用高级词汇、词组以增加文采使用高级词汇、词组以增加文采 1.The tourists had to ask the village
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