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1、 夯实基础，循序渐进 -2014年高考英语改错书面 表达题型分析与相应对策 永嘉永临中学永嘉永临中学 潘娟娟潘娟娟 12014短文改错 分析 短文改错以小故事的形式呈现短文改错以小故事的形式呈现,重点是学生重点是学生常犯的语言错误和逻辑错误。常犯的语言错误和逻辑错误。今年改错部分较前几年来看较为简单，错误典型，均为基础考点。（时态，词性，冠词，代词，形容词，副词，名词的单复数，固定搭配，介词搭配，逻辑关系。）2 I was taking a train to Londons Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was noise a

2、nd filled with people.Before long,a train inspector comes to check out tickets.A passenger realized he couldnt find his ticket but became quite upset.Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket,which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner.The person who found a ti

3、cket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before.Yet,they had so quickly offered the strangers their help.If we could show concern to others on need,the world would be a better place to live in.noisycameandforits/thethepre

4、viouslyinstranger3存在问题：基础知识落实不扎实改错应试技巧不到位备考1.1.在日常教学中落实在日常教学中落实易混淆的时态易混淆的时态,语态等语态等基础语法以及词，词汇用法，固定搭配等知基础语法以及词，词汇用法，固定搭配等知识点识点2.2.培养学生改错的培养学生改错的的的技巧和方法技巧和方法3.3.专题强化训练（改错跟踪表）专题强化训练（改错跟踪表）4短文改错跟踪表短文改错跟踪表时态语态形副误用冠词名词代词非谓语情态动词连词介词动词短语从句其他1234552014浙江省书面表达学校图书馆需要购置一批新书，现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书（po

5、pular science books）和文学类图书（literary books）。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100120词的信，推荐这两类书，并分别说明推荐理由。注意：信的抬头与落款已给出（不计入词数）。Dear Mr.Wang,_ Yours sincerely Li Yue62011校园中存在的随意涂写（校园中存在的随意涂写（to scribble)to scribble)和乱丢垃圾和乱丢垃圾（to litter)to litter)的行为，请用英语给校长写一封的行为，请用英语给校长写一封100-120100-120个个词的信。词的信。2012 Your future depend

6、s on many things but mostly Your future depends on many things but mostly on youon you”：请按下列要求用英语写一篇：请按下列要求用英语写一篇100-120100-120个词的个词的短文：短文：针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法；针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法；举例说明理由举例说明理由2013 2013“OneThingImProudof”为题，用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文，记述一件自己认为得意的事，要求如下：1.记叙这件事；2.简要谈谈你为何感到骄傲或得到的启示。7 今年高考英语写作的话题乍看之下可能会让

7、部分同学觉得不知所措，因为此类话题并非大家之前连续五年已经习惯了的夹叙夹议的形式，前五年的英语作文基本上是“一半记叙、一半评论”的结构，但是今年却省略了其中“记叙”的部分，更加偏重应用性。但是，仍然延续半开放的特点，让学生在框子里自由发挥。风格五年内首次转型，更加关注基础运用能力风格五年内首次转型，更加关注基础运用能力comparing(语言应用，思想)8存在的问题：存在的问题：1.词汇句式匮乏词汇句式匮乏2.内容思想不够丰满（特别是说明推荐内容思想不够丰满（特别是说明推荐 理由部分）理由部分）3.篇章结构、逻辑混乱。篇章结构、逻辑混乱。9高分作文特点高分作文特点1.具备较强的具备较强的语言应

8、用语言应用能力能力2.思维清晰，思维清晰，逻辑严密、衔接紧密逻辑严密、衔接紧密3.考虑文体、语气、文章框架考虑文体、语气、文章框架4.开放部分：自己观点表达有新意开放部分：自己观点表达有新意10有效对策有效对策积累词汇，掌握句型丰富内容，提升思想依托阅读，谋篇布局紧扣应试，落实技巧11积累词汇，掌握句型积累词汇，掌握句型词汇，句型是写作的基础和根本。如何有效积累和掌握？u 一日三词（块）一句型 u 同义词替换（上课引导学生发散思考，联系过去的知识点）u 经常跟踪（好的表达结构，易错点）小组合作，小组出题，听写黑体 ，写作常用，高考高频，阅读 ，完形中的好词，词块，词块听写有写，有交，要改，要讲

9、有写，有交，要改，要讲造句 编小故事积累词汇积累词汇12various/a variety of be famous for/as/to be familiar with/to Its no wonder that There are a variety of places of interest in Shanghai,among which the Bund is most familiar to us.It is famous for the fantastic night views.Once I visited there with amusement,it attracted my

10、 attention closely.Its no wonder that various people prefer to enjoy the unique scenery.-李晶晶 13高级句型：复合句，非谓语结构，特殊句式（强调句，倒装，with结构，固定句型）1.扎实语法教学2.在练习中提升句子结构3.巧用范文掌握句型掌握句型191.1.扎实语法结构（多写不多选扎实语法结构（多写不多选 -精编练习）精编练习）Believe it or not,the village _(去年我们迫不及待想要去的)was destroyed by the mudslide.I will set down

11、 a series of reasons _(同学们今天早上迟到的原因)。At present,the number of countries _(这些国家有很多能讲一口流利英语的人)is increasing rapidly.He was greatly satisfied with those days _(他致力于写那本小说).(devote/spenddevote/spend)We do believe the day _(人类充分利用太阳能的那一天)is around the corner.201.If I took the risk of exploring the jungle,

12、I would write a book about adventure.2.If she had made an effort to obtain a drivers license,she wouldnt be anxious about it now.3.If everyone had been aware of the importance of environmental protection,the measures would be taken effectively.-王小艳别样布置语法作业学了虚拟语气，让学生自己写写学了虚拟语气，让学生自己写写21I like collect

13、ing stamps.I often ran out of my money to buy some stamps.I like this given by my friend Tom,conveying friendship,in particular.I put them into a box made up of wood.My mother said that I would be a rich collector eventually.in particular/run out of/convey/be made up of/eventually-杨豪哲用词，句型，衔接?陪孩子一起进

14、步-作业反馈22Ilikecollectingstamps.Ioftenranoutofmymoneytobuysomestamps.Like?be fond ofbe crazy aboutbe enthusiastic aboutbe addicted toenjoyIenjoycollectingstamps,whichrunsoutofmymoney.Beingcrazyaboutcollectingstamps,Ioftenrunoutofmymoneytobuythem.Addictedtocollectingstamps,Ioftenrunoutofmymoneytobuythe

15、m.23写一写（巧用范文）Li Na was highly praised and appreciate for _ she had done,and she said“Its worthwhile to save a persons life _(尽管摔断了腿)（get ones leg broken/ones leg is broken）变一变n(When)highly praised and appreciate forwhat she had done,she said“Its worthwhile to save a persons life despite/in spite of

16、getting the leg broken.what despite of getting the leg broken24句型简单，要点分散，没有连接词We swam in the sea and had fun on the beach.We enjoyed the delicious seafood.We watched the sunset.Its great fun swimming in the sea and we spent a wonderfull afternoon on the beach.Whats more,we enjoyed some delicious sea

17、food in the golden setting sun.It was the sunset that impressed me most!25 积累素材，提升思想（高大上）课文，完形，阅读，单项中的素材和人身哲理启示M4U3 A taste of English humour奋斗的故事奋斗的故事A great person I can learn from人物篇：M1U5 Nelson Mandela M4U1 Women of achievement U2 Working the land U3 A taste of English humour M5 Unit 1 Great Sci

18、entists 出行游玩：M1U3 Travel journal M3U5 Canada M4U5 Theme parks节假日：M3U1 Festivals around the world丰富内容，提升思想丰富内容，提升思想26完形，阅读 阅读完形中的总结点睛之句，升华人生哲理让学生就这个中心句编故事，发散思维完形阅读中的小故事改编成为自己的故事28 We should all remember that its not the destination that counts in life,but the journey.That the journey with people we l

19、ove is all that really matters.It is such a simple truth but it is so easily forgotten.I have come to realize that life is just like playing basketball.You should have an aim.After that,just be confident and keep going.Never give up and you will make it sooner or later.The happiest people are those

20、who can really appreciate the beauty of life.In life we will always be faced with challenges,problemsand disasters.Always keep in mind that a disaster cansometimes be good luck in disguise.29依托阅读，谋篇布局依托阅读，谋篇布局从阅读中学习框架结构，主题立意 让学生在模仿中积累经验。让学生在模仿中积累经验。源于源于 课文课文 课外阅读材料课外阅读材料30Passage 1:Passage 1:(2010年会

21、考阅读C篇)Have you ever met the situation where you kept thinking that there are opportunities,or chances,which are better than your current one?This is the syndrome(综合症)when you are looking at the other side of the grass and think that the grass is greener on the other side and is also what I call the“

22、greener grass”syndrome.Why are you like this？Uncertainty and curiosity play a big part in creating the“greener grass”syndrome.If you have this syndrome,you are likely to miss a lot of things you have now.When you are always focusing on other opportunities,sometimes you may waste the opportunity righ

23、t in front of you.So what can you do to treat the“greener grass”syndrome?The first thing to do is recognize that your current job is your best choice right now.Try to focus on“what is”instead of“what if”.Secondly,always stick to your job,no matter which side you are at.Last but not least,always do y

24、our best in your current job.In conclusion,it is important for you to choose a side,and make the best out of it.32 This is the syndrome(综合症)when you are looking at the other side of the grass and think that the grass is greener on the other side and is also what I call the“greener grass”syndrome.Unc

25、ertainty and curiosity play a big part in creating the“greener grass”syndrome.We still need to have money in todays society.So what can you do to treat the“greener grass”syndrome?What is“greener grass”syndrome?What causes“greener grass”syndrome?How to treat“greener grass”syndrome?introductionexplana

26、tionDiscussion33So how to face the challenge and deal with the pressure properly?The first thing to do isThe first thing to do is Secondly,.Secondly,.Last but not leastLast but not least,How to face the challenge and deal with your pressure properly?In conclusion,.34高中生在学习生活中会遇到很多压力，请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文

27、，介绍如何解决压力的方法。注意：词数：100 左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；Nowadays,there are a lot of pressures on high school students._PressuresHow to deal with From studies Make a scientific study plan,About lifeGet along with classmates,Writing 一般现在时一般现在时时态：时态：35A STUDENT OF AFRICAN WILDLIFE主题句与细节的行文关系主题句与细节的行文关系1.What kind of

28、 person is Jane?Can you think of some words to describe her?2.What can we learn from her?The following paragraphs,which is better?Why?36A In my opinion,Jane is a brave woman.She spent many years observing and recording the daily activities of chimps in Africa.Because of her devotion to the study of

29、chimps in the wild forest,people began to discover that chimps hunt and eat meat.Besides,with her many years of hard work in studying the body language of chimps,Jane also discovered how chimps communicate with each other and the social system of chimps.After reading the passage,Janes determination

30、and devotion to the study of chimps inspires me.She went to Africa bravely to achieve her dream of studying chimps in the wild environment.Although living in the forest for a woman is not so easy,she insisted on spending many years observing and recording the daily activities of chimps,in order to g

31、et further understanding of them.It is her determination and hard work that lead her to discover how chimps communicate with each other and their social system.B37A In my opinion,Jane is a brave woman.She spent many years observing and recording the daily activities of chimps.Because of her devotion

32、 to the study of chimps in the wild forest,people began to discover that chimps hunt and eat meat.Besides,with her many years of hard work in studying the body language of chimps,Jane also discovered how chimps communicate with each other and the social system of chimps.determineddevoteddetermined,h

33、ard workbravespent many years observing and recordingWith her manydevotion to the study of chimps in the wildyears of hard work in行文逻辑，主题句38紧扣应试，落实技巧紧扣应试，落实技巧1.不同体裁的文体，有计划有目的地训练学生审题，分析，掌握它们的各自特点。2.有精细的反馈，词法 句法 结构 逻辑 篇章 内容思想 不断提升 熟悉体裁和风格如写有关环保类的文章，学生写到：Wed better go out walking instead of driving a c

34、ar.Whats more,it is obvious that we could buy varieties of clothes to meet our temporary demands.39应试策略1、重审题，定基调、重审题，定基调2、先罗列要点（、先罗列要点（4-5点），再提炼要点点），再提炼要点（2-3点），切中题意点），切中题意3、传授得分亮点的秘诀、传授得分亮点的秘诀4：定稿：认真检查，改正错误：定稿：认真检查，改正错误5、誊抄：工整规范、誊抄：工整规范40备考计划1.有效落实课本基础词，词块，句型，语法，坚持每日三词 一句贯穿始终。2.穿插完形阅读，并利用好这些材料，让学生积累更多素材丰富思想，对于好词好句应进行摘录和仿写，好的语句和故事进行背诵和改写。3.坚持两周一次习作（真题各类题材）限时训练，做好有效评价和反馈，并点拨此类作文的写作特点和应试技巧。41