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1、2023考研英语作文范文之低碳环保2023考研英语作文范文之低碳环保低碳与环保构思点拨图片中一个小男孩,早已进入甜蜜的梦乡,电视却仍然在 播放,这时候妈妈走过来帮他关了电视,还责备他为什么总是 忘记关电视。显然,直观看来,这幅图是在告诉我们要节约用 电。但是,我们假设从更宏观,更深层次的角度去考虑,这幅 图正是在告诉我们一个流行的生活理念:低碳生活。所以本文 旨在倡导一种低碳环保的生活方式。因此本文的内容和构造可 如下:第一段:描绘图画;第二段:列举现象,分析影响;第三 段:建议措施,展望将来。思维拓展环保话题,例如节约能、拼车、交通问题等图片都可以与 低碳生活的理念相联络,从低碳的角度入手展
2、开写作。高分范文As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, a boy is sleeping soundly and fortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother es and turns offthe television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again。This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our
3、daily life. Many people are used to doing everything with the television on, not actually watching it at all. Such a habit can cause waste of much electricity and energy, and result in the emission of carbon. This deviates from the popular concept of “low carbon life“ 一 to reduce the emission of car
4、bon, especially carbon dioxide, to protect our enviro ent and realize sustainabledevelopment. According to statistics, if we can decrease the time for having the television on by one hour each day, we can deduce the amount of carbon emission by 4. 71 kilogram each monthoTo serve as responsible stewa
5、rds of the pla,we must promote and popularize a low carbon life among the public from every detail in our daily life. We must change the past practice of sacrificing long-term enviro ental health for short-term rapid economic development, and shift to developing green economy, circular economy and l
6、ow carbon economy. All these effective measures can help us to reach harmony between development of the society and health of the natureo佳作妙译如上图生动地展示,一个小男孩正在沙发上舒适地睡觉, 电视还开着。这时候妈妈走过来帮他关了电视,责怪小男孩又 忘了关电视。这种现象在我们的生活中随处可见。很多人习惯于做什么 事情都开着电视,实际上并不看。这种习惯会导致电力和能的 浪费,这会导致碳排放。这偏离了流行的 “低碳生活”的理 念。低碳生活是指,减少碳,尤其是二
7、氧化碳的排放,以保护 环境,实现可持续开展。根据统计数据,假设我们每天把开电 视的时间减少一小时,那么每个月可以减少4. 17千克的碳排 放量。作为对地球负责任的管理者,我们必须在公众中推广并普 及低碳的生活方式,从日常生活中的每个细节开始。我们必需 要改变为了获得短期的快速经济开展,牺牲长期的环境安康的 做法,转向开展绿色经济、循环经济以及低碳经济。所有这些 有效的措施可以帮助我们实现社会开展与自然有序开展之间的 和谐。名师点评is sleeping soundly:熟睡,也可以表达为A boy is fast asleepo “soundly and fortably 这类副词的参 加,使
8、得描绘更生动活泼,而不是单调的主谓宾。 A boy is sleeping soundly and fortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother es and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again。该句主干构造是: A boy is sleeping, when his mother es and turns off the televisiono这个句型的含义是
9、:一件事情正在发生(正在睡觉),突然 发生了另一件事(妈妈来关电视)。“with the television on” : with 引导的伴随构造, 即 A boy is sleeping, while the television is on. 也可 以写成伴随状语A boy is sleeping, forgetting to turn off the televisionoublaming the boy for not having turned off the television again,这句是妈妈关电视的伴随动作,一边关 电视,一边责怪孩子忘记关电视。图画描绘这句,写得越精彩越好,这句是先入为主的句子,也是阅卷老师重点看的句子。are used to doing:习惯于做某事,使用短语表达, 地道准确。to serve as responsible stewards of the pla:这 是2023年真题阅读中的原句,的文章里面的句型,引用的标 准到位。一般而言,环保类话题,都可以用这句话,引出第三段的 个人评论。历年真题是一座宏大的宝库,我们一定要充分利用,举一 反三。
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