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1、Unit 3 Online tours 第4课时 writing 八年级英语下册同步精品讲义（牛津译林版）知识精讲话题分析本单元的主题是“在线旅行”。通过本单元的学习，学生可以尝试写一本旅游指南，介绍一个景点和城市甚至国家等。导游一般包括以下几个方面：（1）一个地方的现状、历史和文化；（2）主要景点、交通和天空（3）个人感情或愿望。写作目标旅游写作结构通常采用“总、一点、总”结构，大多数时态为一般现在时态。写作时，首先要说明旅游目的地的概况；然后逐一介绍每个景点，包括你所看到和听到的；最后，表达你想去那里的愿望。能力拓展请根据下列内容提示，以My travel plan为题，写一篇80100词

2、的英语短文。内容提示：1. 今年暑假我打算和家人去大连旅行。大连很美，天气也很好，适合旅游；2. 我们可以在海里游泳，品尝可口的海鲜。回来之前，我们打算给朋友们带一些纪念品；3. 我们将会在那里度过一个轻松愉快的假期。My travel plan_【答案】My travel planIm going to travel to Dalian with my family this summer holiday. We plan to stay there for a week. Dalian is a very beautiful city. Its near the sea. The weat

3、her is fine and it is suitable for travelling. In Dalian, we can go swimming in the sea and eat delicious seafood and some other local food. We are going to buy some souvenirs for our friends before we come back. Im sure we will have a happy holiday there.【详解】这是一篇话题作文。话题是My travel plan，根据所给中文提示写一篇80

4、100词的英语短文。本文主要书写旅行计划，可知主要时态是一般将来时和一般现在时。认真阅读汉语提示，审清主题，根据提示要点，列出本文的写作提纲。写作中可适当使用连词，注意表达顺序，表达要有条理性，语句通顺，意思连贯，要符合逻辑关系。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：我的旅行计划今年暑假我要和家人去大连旅游。我们计划在那里呆一个星期。大连是一个非常美丽的城市。它在海边。天气很好，适合旅行。在大连，我们可以去海里游泳，吃美味的海鲜和其他一些当地食物。我们回来之前要给朋友们买些纪念品。我相信我们会在那里度过一个愉快的假期。【点睛】这篇文章包含了提示的所有的内

5、容，条理清楚，语句通顺，书写规范，时态运用正确，语句通顺，意思连贯。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。（5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。分层提分A你刚从海南岛回来，请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇80词左右的报道。1中国第二大海岛，海口是它的省会城市；2气候温暖，空气新鲜，有海滩，有高大的椰子树；3可以游泳、钓鱼、划船、去花市、品

6、尝各种海鲜等；5你的想法参考词汇：椰子树coconut palm tree_【答案】I have been to Hainan Island recently. It is the second largest island in China and Haikou is its capital city.In Hainan, you can enjoy warm weather and fresh air. There are beautiful beaches and tall coconut palm trees there. People love swimming and fishin

7、g in the sea. You can also go to visit the flower markets and enjoy all kinds of delicious seafood.Haina Island is really a good place to visit .I hope I can go there again in the future.【详解】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了大量短语，例如have been to，the second largest island，warm weather and fresh air，beautiful b

8、eaches，love swimming and fishing，in the sea，the flower markets，all kinds of，delicious seafood，a good place to visit，in the future等。而It is the second largest island in China and Haikou is its capital city./ There are beautiful beaches and tall coconut palm trees there./ You can also go to visit the f

9、lower markets and enjoy all kinds of delicious seafood.多种and并列结构结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是短文的最大亮点。点睛：这是一篇提示作文，根据提示内容可知用一般现在时，可把提示内容逐条翻译成英文，同时结合实际展开合理的想象，在行文中注意使用一些常见的短语，会给习作增色。B三亚位于海南岛的最南端，是著名的国际旅游城市，被誉为“东方夏威夷”。请根据下表的要点提示，以“Welcome to Sanya”为题用英语写一篇短文，介绍三亚之旅。locationin the south of Hainan Islandsizeabout

10、1, 919 square kilometersweatherwarm, sunny all year roundthings youcan enjoybeaches, coconut(椰子) trees, water games, beautiful shells(贝壳), all kinds of fruit .feelingenjoyable要求: 1. 短文必须包含提示中的所有内容，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息；3. 词数70左右，短文的开头已经给出, 不计入总词数。 Welcome to SanyaMany people have said that if

11、 you come to Sanya, you will never want to leave. Its totally true. _【答案】Welcome to SanyaMany people have said that if you come to Sanya, you will never want to leave. Its totally true. Sanya is in the south of Hainan Island. Its about 1, 919 square kilometres. The weather here is warm and sunny all

12、 year round. So you can come here any time you like.Sanya is famous for its beautiful beaches and fresh, delicious fruit. You can see coconut trees everywhere and enjoy all kinds of fruit. There are also plenty of activities you can take part in. You can play interesting water games with other trave

13、llers and pick up beautiful shells on the beach.Welcome to Sanya. I think that you will have an enjoyable trip!【详解】1.题干解读：本题为材料作文，要求根据题目所给要点提示介绍海南三亚这一座美丽的旅游城市，并介绍游客到此之后可以进行的娱乐活动。2.写作指导：写作时人称应用第一、二人称，时态应用一般现在时或一般将来时。题目所给要点必须全部包含，可适当进行拓展。短文主要分三部分进行叙述，第一部分主要介绍三亚的一些基本情况，例如方位、面积、气候等；第二部分则介绍游客可以在三亚进行的娱乐活动

14、；第三部分则是对游客发出邀请。写作时应避免出现单词拼写和语法使用错误。C英国学生Frank计划来中国旅旅行，向你询问什么时间去中国旅行好, 请你根据以下提示，以李明的名义给Frank写一封电子邮件。1. 秋季是游览中国的最佳时间； 2. 天气不太冷也不太热；3. 如果你想去华南游览，最好带一把雨伞；4. 与其他地方相比，南方雨水充足；5. 你可以住在旅店，也欢迎你住在我家。要求： 1要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。2词数：80字左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。3. 书写工整占1分。参考词汇：华南 South China 与比较compared toDear Frank, Its good

15、 to hear that you may visit China._ I hope this helps you.Best wishes,Li Ming【答案】Dear Frank,Its good to hear that you may visit China. I think the best time to come is in autumn. In most parts of China, the weather is neither too hot nor too cold in this season. Its the most comfortable time to trav

16、el. If you want to go to visit South China, youd better bring an umbrella. Compared to other places, theres plenty of rain.You can stay in a hotel. It wont cost you much money. Welcome to stay in my home as well. Im happy to be your guide.I hope this helps you. Best wishes,Li Ming【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一

17、篇邮件作文。要求根据提示内容，给Frank一些来中国旅行的建议。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第二人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍游览的最佳时间以及给出一些旅游的建议。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。D假如你叫小文，你的美国笔友Mike计划来你的家乡Hohhot旅游，请你写一封邮件向他介绍你家乡的地理位置，旅游特色，气候特点，旅游的最佳时间及原因等。不少于80词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Mike,How are you? Id like to tell you something about my hometown._Welcome t

18、o my hometown, Im looking forward to seeing you.Best wishes!Yours,Xiao Wen【答案】Dear Mike,How are you? Id like to tell you something about my hometown.My hometown is in Hohhot, Inner Mongolia. It is in the north of China. It has many ancient relics, including Zhaojun Tomb, Five Pagoda Temple and White

19、 Tower. It is famous for barbecue and the production of mushrooms and hops. In winter, it is cold with frequent blizzards and the day is long. In summer, it is warm, and the day is short. So people have to wear layers of clothes if they travel here.Visitors usually go for a holiday here in August. B

20、ecause this is the best time to enjoy the beauty of the grassland. People can enjoy the milk tea and roasted lamb chop. They can also try wrestling and dancing with others. It is very interesting. Welcome to my hometown, Im looking forward to seeing you.Best wishes!Yours,Xiao Wen【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于

21、邮件写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求介绍家乡呼和浩特的位置，特色，气候，旅游的最佳时机及其原因。2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主，介绍家乡的基本情况及旅游特色，要叙述完整，条理清晰。E正在海南旅游的David过几天还想要来北京参观老舍茶馆(Lao She Teahouse)。请你帮他做出旅行建议：至少包括交通方式、活动安排等，以供他选择。5080词左右。提示词语：fast; -er and -er; be famous for; so that; journey提示问题：1. What are the possible (有可能的) ways trave

22、ling from Hainan to Beijing and their good/bad points?2. What do you advise David to do in Lao She Teahouse?_【答案】Dear David, I am so glad that you will come to Beijing. There are many things about Chinese traditional culture to learn. I will show you around so that you can experience and enjoy Chine

23、se culture.You can take a train or take a plane from Hainan to Beijing. And plane is the fastest way. Have you read Teahouse? It is one of Lao Shes famous plays. And Lao She is famous for his plays. Id like to take you to Lao She Teahouse. We can drink tea and see Beijing opera there. It will be great. Chinese traditional culture is colorful and becoming better and better. I hope you will have a pleasant journey.Yours,Li Ming【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示问题进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时综合使用三个人称来行文，时态以一般现在时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍建议的出行方式以及活动安排；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。